one weak to flesh made 1 week free from pleasures pain one sick within has another chance to begin fantasies playground the mind travels light years searching for the heart to yearn reason find rest and peace for 1 weak thru one week taking captive the bodies that wanna play leaving lone emotions at bay creeping stealing melting once hardened feelings now memories get in the way 1 week made one weak find purpose in letting go sittin still waitin believin trustin and Prayin for another week to pass day by day free from bein a slave again...
"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..." ASIEM "Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran (Be and it is) " A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder
2. "RE: 1 weak, one week" In response to Reply # 0
Methinks you play well with words, kind sir! --
A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence -- I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥
2 weak to let 2 weeks of freedom last till withdrawl eased so one weak gave back 1 week of gain all for the pleasure of pain in a moment here then gone sanity lost given the cost idle difference is now boss endless loop played over and over but 1 weak for one week to flesh and feel just might bail with this appeal
"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..." ASIEM "Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran (Be and it is) " A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder
11. "RE: 2 weak for 2 weeks" In response to Reply # 4
thank you brother for all the wisdom instruction demonstration acknowledgments criticism thoughts care and most of all thank you for believing in me enough to trust me with your Life...this TRUTH I hope pray will permeate through me and find me faithful enough to BE!
Emanuel "moenay" passed this way December 16, 2013 and left more than memories he left LOVE a fertile ground to plant and harvest... Rize In Prosperity
"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..." ASIEM "Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran (Be and it is) " A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder
6. "i liked this b/c it was simple" In response to Reply # 0
straight-forward, and descriptive as well.
fave lines:
1 week made one weak find purpose in letting go sittin still waitin believin trustin and Prayin for another week to pass day by day free from bein a slave again...
i liked how you used shorter lines for this as well. the most important lines of the poem *for me* are above. i felt as if most of the emotion and *meat* is there. Peace~
7. "RE: i liked this b/c it was simple" In response to Reply # 6
"meat" hhhmm? yeh thats where i need to place most of my "meat" too thanks mindful emotion does drop here
"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..." ASIEM "Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran (Be and it is) " A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder
9. " a few weeks later..." In response to Reply # 8
^^^^ cause sometimes i forget
"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..." ASIEM "Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran (Be and it is) " A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder
10. "RE: 1 weak, one week" In response to Reply # 0
whats often lost to short term memory is sometimes relived and so the pain resides the hope is in meditation i wont repeat without conscious
"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..." ASIEM "Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran (Be and it is) " A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder
13. "RE: 1 weak, one week" In response to Reply # 0
This has got to be one of my favorite by you. The flesh is an interesting vessel. ~~~~~~~~ When One learns to live without fear, then One cannot be broken.