give us the part please to pull at them heart strings depicting two strong beings that innocent by way of words we havent entertained in a minute diggin the roles played all without being infinite admit when she read the script he fell awake in every sentence primarily the scene when he tell her what she mean... that he would be honored if she gathered a seed from him later remind their mothers fish dreams mean nothing they demonstrate a love via action of the art being one from the start before things fall apart he perfects her this is an act of god guided by the great director he protects her up to the point that time disconnector
i'm confused but nice words it is unfinished but as finished as it will ever be? profound might steal that verse goodluck and keep dropping that hotness
yeah i meant that's the best I can do with the computer that I have . Im not trying to write songs btw im trying to write a story of my life with most of these verses. So with most of these the verse is like another page to the story.
Its all really for me at the end of the day and I know im not as nice as i think i am. But what the fuck is wrong with being mediocre at your hobby these days? Why everybody gotta be the best? I'm not trying to sale it. Just want to share it.
7. "RE: you playful, dude. " In response to Reply # 6
perception is always the challenge often the emotion brought may not be the one sent in literature anyway. the beauty of sound at least brings something more of the spirit of the writer hence spoken word breathes life that said i must say this piece spoke (written) to my present relationship perfectly in the moment knowing a "seed" gathered is not necessarily human in my case. thanks
"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..." ASIEM "Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran (Be and it is) " A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder
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