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you really put the feeling of "death" into this piece. at least for me, i could... feel the actions, the swiftness, the finality of it all. especially in the following lines:
I don't deal with death very well, so I was uncomfortable with this poem from the get-go. I don't think my negative reaction is a bad thing... I think it's a credit to your excellent writing skills... you really moved me.
"To be a poet is a condition, not a profession." - Robert Frost
If I had just read the poem ... *Without the Title* ... I dunnno if I'd a' known that you were talkin' 'bout DEATH -- But the more I read it -- The more clearly I see the Grim Reaper --
*Felt*
A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence -- I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥