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southernboy_423
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Tue Mar-27-07 03:20 AM

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"So Okay Player"


  

          

I aint saying I'm the hardest,
just that my heart is
fully equip to starts this
cuz i been starving
im..painting a picture like a late great artist
feeling i can be O-kay's next big artist
i aint the shine of the board,
but i've shined on the board
left time for the board,
bleed my mind on the board
dudes gimmicks they civics
ima da honda accord
the most peferred on lot
but alot can't afford
i aint making yall be'lee me
if of one's own accord
the train moving all a'board
yall all bored, i aint the next big thang
im the next big change
no neck-lace chain
"bleng'd"-out err'rangs
jus me Jus' Sleep
ima headline mayne
ima ahead guys mayne
they cutting thru backstreet
tryn' creep, and im cruising down maine,
whoever said my rhyming done
should gimme a nugget like iverson
rewind this son,
try caught me spalding
no jum but still balling,
they premature raps still crawling
people calling telling me put my all-in
....and my reply is okay player
ima be the next artist on okayplayer

they like how i do it, so okay player
they telling me do it, so okay player
i like how i do it, so okay player
i feel i can do it for okayplayer 2x

im posted posting
spitting da dopest
i'ane at the top of the list
but listen thats my focus
lyrical dictionary
visual pictionary
with it my rhymes vary
hot..my rhymes very
often my minds buried, ina blank book
pin and a zune full of instrumentals
im giving tru me, since 1983
people patient-ly a-waiting me
when i surface-its-gone-be
OK-P dot com backslash art-ists Jus' Sleep
if not, then i'll just sleep
continue to post on the boards
and annihilate beats
craft being crafted ima craftsmen
my tool game like a pool game
i call all my shots
this site the 8ball
im calling my side pocket
one eye close when i shoot so i can lock it
until then im shoot sol-ids yall go it


they like how i do it, so okay player
they telling me do it, so okay player
i like how i do it, so okay player
i feel i can do it for okayplayer 2x

no third verse i actually got on here to write about something else, then i thru on the JDilla Ruff Draft album, the Take Notice instrumental, and this popped out, ima copy and paste it to make it a real cut on my album, yessir

damn i love this site...lol, if inspiration needed a place to stay, this site will be the Hilton or some shit...lol


Peace and Hip-Hop
MusicIsLife


"everyone like spectacular pass me the ordinary, da peanut butter and jelly to da lobster and shrimp, the o' oh thats him, to the mobsters and pimps" - ME, dammit!

http://www.soundclick.com/artist/5/youngsleep_music.htm

http://www.myspace.com/youngsleep

"everyone like spectacular pass me the ordinary, da peanut butter and jelly to da lobster and shrimp, the o' oh thats him, to the mobsters and pimps" - ME, dammit!

http://www.soundclick.com/artist/5/youngsleep_music.htm

http://www.myspace.com/youngsleep

  

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Topic Outline
Subject Author Message Date ID
I'm Here So far
Mar 27th 2007
1
RE: I'm Here So far
Mar 28th 2007
2
      I Noticed That ...
Mar 29th 2007
6
One of my favs
Mar 28th 2007
3
up nm
Mar 28th 2007
4
thas whats up
Mar 28th 2007
5
yeah, up nm
Apr 01st 2007
7
*OFFICIAL*
Apr 01st 2007
8
RE: *OFFICIAL*
Apr 01st 2007
9

empro
Member since May 24th 2005
3975 posts
Tue Mar-27-07 03:37 AM

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1. "I'm Here So far"
In response to Reply # 0


  

          

>I aint saying I'm the hardest,
>just that my heart is
>fully equip to starts this
>cuz i been starving
>im..painting a picture like a late great artist
>feeling i can be O-kay's next big artist
>i aint the shine of the board,
>but i've shined on the board
>left time for the board,
>bleed my mind on the board
>dudes gimmicks they civics
>ima da honda accord
>the most peferred on lot
>but alot can't afford
>i aint making yall be'lee me
>if of one's own accord
>the train moving all a'board
>yall all bored, i aint the next big thang
>im the next big change
>no neck-lace chain
>"bleng'd"-out err'rangs
>jus me Jus' Sleep
>ima headline mayne
>ima ahead guys mayne
>they cutting thru backstreet
>tryn' creep, and im cruising down maine,
>whoever said my rhyming done
>should gimme a nugget like iverson
>rewind this son,
>try caught me spalding
>no jum but still balling,
>they premature raps still crawling
>people calling telling me put my all-in
>....and my reply is okay player
>ima be the next artist on okayplayer


And you're KILLING this post man...I gotta read the rest now, Great start and I'll be back after I read the whole piece

  

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southernboy_423
Member since May 12th 2005
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Wed Mar-28-07 01:09 AM

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2. "RE: I'm Here So far"
In response to Reply # 1


  

          

good looking out on the read homie

second verse slipped a lil cuz i got anxious to go write it on paper and finish the whole thing

peace


"everyone like spectacular pass me the ordinary, da peanut butter and jelly to da lobster and shrimp, the o' oh thats him, to the mobsters and pimps" - ME, dammit!

http://www.soundclick.com/artist/5/youngsleep_music.htm

http://www.myspace.com/youngsleep

  

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PhotoSynthesis
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Thu Mar-29-07 10:50 PM

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6. "I Noticed That ..."
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The second verse didn't necessarily fall off, but it wasn't as strong as the first flow~stream -- Never~The~Less -- Together, and all in all, ^this^ joint rocks wit flava! --


*Yummy*


A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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marijane
Member since Feb 26th 2004
13093 posts
Wed Mar-28-07 08:12 AM

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3. "One of my favs"
In response to Reply # 0


  

          

Sorry I'm just not in a writing mood.

_____________________________________
WITH CUZ (STACEY) GONE, I'LL NEVER REALLY BE HERE AGAIN

I swear I'm a marry an OKP


Nakia Genevieve are my middle names... Not my attempt to morph Phenom with Novembersgift... But...

  

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mindful
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Wed Mar-28-07 08:51 PM

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4. "up nm"
In response to Reply # 0


  

          


-----------------------------------
book1|http://www.lulu.com/content/132318
http://msmind.wordpress.com
http://www.clutchmagazine.com

I wrote my first novel because
I wanted to read it. ŠToni Morrison

  

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Ezzsential
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Wed Mar-28-07 08:58 PM

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5. "thas whats up"
In response to Reply # 0


  

          

this is heat ,kid

just a release forreal! nice



shouldn't say it all or it will be taken
stolen by the Devil
God's my only vacation


...www.soundclick.com/ezzsentialsoul
www.myspace.com/ezzsentialsoulmusiq
www.myspace.com/ezzsentialsoul
www.webspawner.com/users/delicateaurasoul4/index.html

  

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mindful
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Sun Apr-01-07 08:39 PM

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7. "yeah, up nm"
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-----------------------------------
book1|http://www.lulu.com/content/132318
http://msmind.wordpress.com
http://www.clutchmagazine.com

I wrote my first novel because
I wanted to read it. ŠToni Morrison

  

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Shakeet Lokh Em
Member since Mar 22nd 2005
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Sun Apr-01-07 08:54 PM

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8. "*OFFICIAL*"
In response to Reply # 0


  

          

Word.

"I'm scientific, but my reflex gangsta"- Black Thought

  

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southernboy_423
Member since May 12th 2005
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Sun Apr-01-07 10:46 PM

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9. "RE: *OFFICIAL*"
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thanks for reading everyone who did, thanks for the comment


"everyone like spectacular pass me the ordinary, da peanut butter and jelly to da lobster and shrimp, the o' oh thats him, to the mobsters and pimps" - ME, dammit!

http://www.soundclick.com/artist/5/youngsleep_music.htm

http://www.myspace.com/youngsleep

  

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