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SepiaSylph
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Mon Mar-26-07 03:35 PM

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"What do you think this poem is about?"


  

          

You linger somewhere near
here though you rarely
step out of the shadows until
that ambiguous hour of heather.

Your lair is well known to me and
routinely you take me there
to quell your loneliness and
share something parallel to love.

You plant wearying kisses 'til
fulfilled, lips bruising delicate flesh--
death tattooed beneath these lashes.
Then you leave me again.

--SepiaSylph

Okay, I wrote this for a poetry class a long long time ago, and no one knew what it was about. There were good guesses though, even guesses that *could* have been right.
I found it while going through my external hard drive and wondered what you Freestylers' interpretations might be.

  

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Subject Author Message Date ID
the memory of love, something lost.
Mar 26th 2007
1
an aching infatuation?
Mar 26th 2007
2
RE: What do you think this poem is about?
Mar 26th 2007
3
lol.
Mar 26th 2007
4
poetry? GOD the devil?
Mar 26th 2007
5
Hm. How'd you come to those guesses?
Mar 26th 2007
6
      cuz
Mar 27th 2007
10
depression??
Mar 26th 2007
7
I'll also ask how you, how'd you come to that answer?
Mar 26th 2007
8
      thats what came to me reading ya shit
Mar 26th 2007
9
sexual escapades with the same sex
Mar 27th 2007
11
Definitely not, lol.
Mar 27th 2007
12
It is about...
Mar 28th 2007
13

Morehouse
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Mon Mar-26-07 03:57 PM

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1. "the memory of love, something lost."
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Mrs_Mallory
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Mon Mar-26-07 04:19 PM

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2. "an aching infatuation?"
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I'm Back!

  

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freedomfighter
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Mon Mar-26-07 07:28 PM

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3. "RE: What do you think this poem is about?"
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strip tease drawing you back in wit a thong
i'm wrong what?

Freeworld Order
Dangurus Mines

  

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SepiaSylph
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Mon Mar-26-07 07:41 PM

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4. "lol."
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YES YOU'RE WRONG.

  

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Ezzsential
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Mon Mar-26-07 09:53 PM

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5. "poetry? GOD the devil?"
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Mon Mar-26-07 09:54 PM by Ezzsential

  

          

prolly poems or writing itself..




shouldn't say it all or it will be taken
stolen by the Devil
God's my only vacation


...www.soundclick.com/ezzsentialsoul
www.myspace.com/ezzsentialsoulmusiq
www.myspace.com/ezzsentialsoul
www.webspawner.com/users/delicateaurasoul4/index.html

  

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SepiaSylph
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Mon Mar-26-07 10:10 PM

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6. "Hm. How'd you come to those guesses?"
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If you don't mind saying..

  

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Ezzsential
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Tue Mar-27-07 02:46 PM

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10. "cuz"
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it seemed that u were saying (to me)
that this thing only approaches u sometimes
and it was like u were alone when it happens
so i figured...ok, writing? or god but nah maybe the devil cuz it seemed it left u in pain or something
but then i thought maybe just wtiting itself



shouldn't say it all or it will be taken
stolen by the Devil
God's my only vacation


...www.soundclick.com/ezzsentialsoul
www.myspace.com/ezzsentialsoulmusiq
www.myspace.com/ezzsentialsoul
www.webspawner.com/users/delicateaurasoul4/index.html

  

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Lincoln Hawk
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Mon Mar-26-07 10:18 PM

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7. "depression??"
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"dude, the only thing i fear is your hair cut.. what is that a mop glued to your head? come on man... style up."-Bartek

all across ya forhead and cheek bones...i break facials and reconstruct beauty to ugly...im an artist mang...Lincoln Picasso Van Gogh

  

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SepiaSylph
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Mon Mar-26-07 10:59 PM

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8. "I'll also ask how you, how'd you come to that answer?"
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?

  

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Lincoln Hawk
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Mon Mar-26-07 11:01 PM

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9. "thats what came to me reading ya shit"
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"dude, the only thing i fear is your hair cut.. what is that a mop glued to your head? come on man... style up."-Bartek

all across ya forhead and cheek bones...i break facials and reconstruct beauty to ugly...im an artist mang...Lincoln Picasso Van Gogh

  

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mindful
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Tue Mar-27-07 08:41 PM

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11. "sexual escapades with the same sex"
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who becomes the lost love once again...

but, my imagination is running extra wild tonight. so....

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I wrote my first novel because
I wanted to read it. ŠToni Morrison

  

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SepiaSylph
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Tue Mar-27-07 09:21 PM

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12. "Definitely not, lol."
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But it is akin to a sexual escapade with someone.

  

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SepiaSylph
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Wed Mar-28-07 09:36 AM

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13. "It is about..."
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Insomnia, personified. As my 'lover' I guess you could say.

I was sleep deprived when I wrote it, which is probably how I got that weird idea anyway.

  

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