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Starks dunked on Bulls
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12028 posts 		Tue Apr-14-15 06:55 PM

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"Poll question: Jaden Smith "Offering""


  

          

http://www.okayplayer.com/news/jaden-smith-offering-mp3.html

Poll result (6 votes)
Flames (3 votes)Vote
I only like the beat (1 votes)Vote
Naw yo (2 votes)Vote

  

  
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when everything else fails, drop a "vintage" hip hop record.
Apr 15th 2015
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Not bad.
Apr 15th 2015
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Not bad - beat's flames, lyrics are ok.
Apr 15th 2015
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Funny thing is he can do complicated or basic rhyme schemes
Apr 15th 2015
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      So we giving him props based on technical style?
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           I replied to a comment about his rhyme scheme.
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Hellyeah
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6507 posts 		Wed Apr-15-15 02:11 PM

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1. "when everything else fails, drop a "vintage" hip hop record."
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can't go wrong with that right?

pathetic

  
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liveguy
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2. "Not bad."
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That beat knock.

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spades
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3. "Not bad - beat's flames, lyrics are ok."
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His flow is good, but his rhyme scheme is still pretty basic. If he keeps at it he might could be good.

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Boogie Stimuli
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4. "Funny thing is he can do complicated or basic rhyme schemes"
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Kid is actually a pretty sick rhymer

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Starks dunked on Bulls
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5. "So we giving him props based on technical style?"
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>Kid is actually a pretty sick rhymer

What about what he's actually saying?

  
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Boogie Stimuli
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6. "I replied to a comment about his rhyme scheme."
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I've heard songs where it was intricate, and I've heard songs where
it was basic.
I've also heard him rhyme on different topics.

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