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Bblock
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here's a song i produced for an LA upcoming rap group
the tabernacle MCz
it's a promo single for the lp
to generate some buzz

http://tabernaclemcz.bandcamp.com/releases

https://soundcloud.com/tabernaclemcz/willie-wanker

http://www.thisisbooksmusic.com/2013/09/12/audio-tabernacle-mcz-willie-wanker/

let me know what yall think

peace

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Well, I like the beat.
Sep 12th 2013
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thanks. its all samples, chopped, extra drum
Sep 12th 2013
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i agree, well produced
Sep 12th 2013
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Yeah, this
Sep 12th 2013
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RE: Yeah, this
Sep 12th 2013
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      yup.. the beat is dope.. shit bangs
Sep 12th 2013
8
thanks. i do have an instrumental
Sep 12th 2013
5
      RE: thanks. i do have an instrumental
Sep 12th 2013
9
Dope liveish sounds!
Sep 12th 2013
7
like the beat a lot
Sep 13th 2013
10
didn't care for the rappers too much, but I'm definitely
Sep 13th 2013
11
thats a dope ass beat, man...
Sep 13th 2013
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That beat is hittin'.
Sep 14th 2013
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i'm sorry, but this shit is wack
Sep 14th 2013
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thanks everyone for the feedback
Sep 14th 2013
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Dope shit Block
Sep 15th 2013
16

mrhood75
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Thu Sep-12-13 03:01 PM

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1. "Well, I like the beat."
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It's certainly a well produced track. How much is live and how is sampled? Regardless, it sounds good.

As for the rest, I'm pretty "eh" on it. The Dolemite sound-alike gets old quick. The second verse is the best, but overall the raps are kinda juvenille. I mean, yay for blowjobs and all that, but it's the verses themselves aren't particularly interesting.

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Bblock
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2. "thanks. its all samples, chopped, extra drum"
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Sounds.
Thats an honest critique
I can live with

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Nick Has a Problem...Seriously
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Thu Sep-12-13 03:16 PM

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3. "i agree, well produced"
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i dig how you had sounds coming from both channels. Don't care for the emcees much. You got an instrumental fam?

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mrhood75
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Thu Sep-12-13 03:26 PM

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4. "Yeah, this"
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>i dig how you had sounds coming from both channels.

Shit sounded dope through the headphones.

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Nick Has a Problem...Seriously
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6. "RE: Yeah, this"
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>>i dig how you had sounds coming from both channels.
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>Shit sounded dope through the headphones.

^^^this. hell yeah!

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My_SP1200_Broken_Again
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Thu Sep-12-13 09:13 PM

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8. "yup.. the beat is dope.. shit bangs"
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Bblock
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Thu Sep-12-13 03:45 PM

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5. "thanks. i do have an instrumental"
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i'm not sure when i'ma let it go though, maybe when we release it officially, it'll be on the bside or whatever

if you got a mix show or somethin', let me know, i may let you get an exclusive

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Nick Has a Problem...Seriously
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9. "RE: thanks. i do have an instrumental"
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I just want to listen to the production minus the vocals so i can really hear what you got going on. Once y'all release it post it up fam.

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_Torchbaras
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Thu Sep-12-13 04:34 PM

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7. "Dope liveish sounds!"
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Dig it.

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Ally Al 2003
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Fri Sep-13-13 07:12 AM

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10. "like the beat a lot"
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MC's not so much, my 13 year old son would think they're hilarious though :)

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jp
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11. "didn't care for the rappers too much, but I'm definitely"
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feeling the beat and the live feel of the track. However, I can appreciate the fact the artists are having fun on this song because that is DEFINITELY missing in Hip Hop.

  

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liveguy
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Fri Sep-13-13 07:11 PM

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12. "thats a dope ass beat, man..."
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The drums are the obvious standout and i'm feeling the sounds that go along with it giving it that pimpish vibe.

Agree with Hood on the rhymes tho....

Not really intersting as those bars have been spat a billion times over.

All good....

You merked that beat, tho.

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The Wordsmith
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Sat Sep-14-13 12:18 AM

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13. "That beat is hittin'."
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If iller MCs were over that, that joint would be killer. The beat is the only legit reason for listening to the cut in the first place. Good job, man.



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justin_scott
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Sat Sep-14-13 01:01 AM

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14. "i'm sorry, but this shit is wack"
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nah, i'm playing.

count me as a lover of the beat. emcees are ok. i wouldn't check for them, but they don't kill the song for me.

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Bblock
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Sat Sep-14-13 10:20 PM

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15. "thanks everyone for the feedback"
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Much appreciated

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Anonymous
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Sun Sep-15-13 07:41 AM

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16. "Dope shit Block"
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The beat is the highlight.

Like others have said, the MCs don't do anything and the concept is tired.

But I do agree with someone above who said that they appreciated the fun they brought to it.

Good work...lookig forward to hearing the rest.

  

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