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lightworks
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Fri Jun-26-15 08:29 AM

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"Critique this photo."


          

Por favor y gracias

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excellent
Jun 26th 2015
1
it was cool the first 5 times.. but it's an easy shot
Jun 26th 2015
2
I think that's where her platform falls apart not her art
Jun 26th 2015
4
      yup
Jun 26th 2015
5
I love it
Jun 26th 2015
3
good composition but my only issue is
Jun 26th 2015
6
Yup iPhone 6
Jun 27th 2015
10
RE: Critique this photo.
Jun 26th 2015
7
not dynamic enough (a bit hot in areas)
Jun 26th 2015
8
RE: not dynamic enough (a bit hot in areas)
Jun 27th 2015
9
      I used Lightroom Mobile
Jun 27th 2015
11
           RE: I used Lightroom Mobile
Jun 27th 2015
12
           oh, I thought this was from the DSLR
Jun 27th 2015
13
it's kinda like this one I shot *link*
Jun 27th 2015
14

c71
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Fri Jun-26-15 01:54 PM

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1. "excellent"
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yes

  

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legsdiamond
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Fri Jun-26-15 01:56 PM

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2. "it was cool the first 5 times.. but it's an easy shot"
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not hating.. just saying you may want to get low or change the angle a little.

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MEAT
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Fri Jun-26-15 04:14 PM

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4. "I think that's where her platform falls apart not her art"
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If she wants to compile a collection of grey line angles it'd much better be suited for a portfolio or organized in a photoblog. She could do a group of shots and post them together also.

I know the insta in Instagram refers to instant, but it's up to the artist to work with what they have.

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legsdiamond
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Fri Jun-26-15 04:28 PM

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5. "yup"
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TBH the fact that you're even a mod here fits squarely within Jag's narrative of OK-sanctioned aggression, bullying, and toxicity. *shrug*

  

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DavidHasselhoff
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Fri Jun-26-15 02:05 PM

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3. "I love it"
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2Future4U
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Fri Jun-26-15 04:34 PM

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6. "good composition but my only issue is"
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sharpness? was this an iphone shot?

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lightworks
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Sat Jun-27-15 07:19 AM

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10. "Yup iPhone 6"
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neuro_OSX
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Fri Jun-26-15 08:51 PM

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7. "RE: Critique this photo."
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Fri Jun-26-15 08:52 PM by neuro_OSX

  

          

A nice variation would be to do a slow shutter shot (5 to 10 secs) which would blur the people and anything else that is moving on the escalator.

Tripod would be a requirement though

"You used to be so cool, but now, you know you're so cold"

  

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Fri Jun-26-15 09:35 PM

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8. "not dynamic enough (a bit hot in areas)"
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feels flat
not enough separation between your highs and lows...not enough contrast

and

where are the deep blacks?

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neuro_OSX
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Sat Jun-27-15 01:00 AM

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9. "RE: not dynamic enough (a bit hot in areas)"
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Sat Jun-27-15 01:13 AM by neuro_OSX

  

          

I seriously doubt she used Silver FX Pro to do the B&W conversion, lol

Prolly just a quick Instagram filter, looks fine.




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lightworks
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11. "I used Lightroom Mobile "
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neuro_OSX
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12. "RE: I used Lightroom Mobile "
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ahhh ok cool. Never used the mobile version, though I live in the full PC version.

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13. "oh, I thought this was from the DSLR"
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yeah, forget what I said then

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Sat Jun-27-15 09:47 PM

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14. "it's kinda like this one I shot *link*"
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https://flic.kr/p/q8AbRA

  

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