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"The Offical Feedback Post: Beats."


  

          

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Subject Author Message Date ID
one leak
Jun 16th 2008
1
That shit is dope
Jun 16th 2008
2
RE: That shit is dope
Jun 16th 2008
3
The Karolina Kid
Jul 03rd 2008
91
That jawn was iLL. And Sun was spittin' Darts!!!!!
Jun 17th 2008
4
RE: one leak
Jun 17th 2008
17
RE: one leak
Jun 23rd 2008
36
RE: one leak
Jun 25th 2008
39
RE: one leak
Jun 30th 2008
76
I REALLY like this
Jul 08th 2008
109
yeah......you beasted that track, fam.
Jul 19th 2008
140
"believe" and "ballad". will return reviews.
Jun 17th 2008
5
RE: "believe" and "ballad". will return reviews.
Jun 17th 2008
11
      cubase, kontakt, hypersonic, FM8, battery
Jun 17th 2008
19
check out 9 and 10
Jun 17th 2008
6
RE: check out 9 and 10
Jun 17th 2008
12
RE: check out 9 and 10
Jun 17th 2008
18
jayech new music.. for critique
Jun 17th 2008
7
RE: jayech new music.. for critique
Jun 17th 2008
9
RE: jayech new music.. for critique
Jun 17th 2008
13
RE: The Offical Feedback Post: Beats.
Jun 17th 2008
8
RE: The Offical Feedback Post: Beats.
Jun 17th 2008
14
newer
Jun 17th 2008
10
RE: newer
Jun 17th 2008
15
RE: newer
Jun 17th 2008
16
RE: newer
Jul 18th 2008
135
Lookin for emcees for some of these...
Jun 18th 2008
20
RE: Lookin for emcees for some of these...
Jun 25th 2008
43
Yo I'm diggin these....
Jun 25th 2008
58
I finally updated the page
Jun 18th 2008
21
Damnsun, that Christmas joint is like epic big and dark
Jul 05th 2008
97
      I make those kinda tracks!
Jul 07th 2008
107
RE: I got some classic bangers
Jun 18th 2008
22
RE: I got some classic bangers
Jun 25th 2008
44
      RE: I got some classic bangers
Jun 30th 2008
79
This may make you question your definition of Hip Hop...
Jun 19th 2008
23
RE: This may make you question your definition of Hip Hop...
Jun 25th 2008
45
RE: The Offical Feedback Post: Beats.
Jun 19th 2008
24
RE: The Offical Feedback Post: Beats.
Jun 19th 2008
25
RE: The Offical Feedback Post: Beats.
Jun 25th 2008
46
RE: The Offical Feedback Post: Beats.
Jul 18th 2008
137
"seven sands, create, and tribal funk"
Jun 21st 2008
26
RE: "seven sands, create, and tribal funk"
Jun 25th 2008
47
      thanks for the feedback...
Jun 26th 2008
61
Let me teach you how to flip a sample:
Jun 22nd 2008
27
get money!!
Jun 25th 2008
48
NeW TrAcK!!! "tHe iLL CoNTacT"!!!!!
Jun 22nd 2008
28
RE: NeW TrAcK!!! "tHe iLL CoNTacT"!!!!!
Jun 25th 2008
40
RE: NeW TrAcK!!! "tHe iLL CoNTacT"!!!!!
Jun 25th 2008
41
RE: NeW TrAcK!!! "tHe iLL CoNTacT"!!!!!
Jun 25th 2008
49
      RE: NeW TrAcK!!! "tHe iLL CoNTacT"!!!!!
Jun 25th 2008
51
RE: The Offical Feedback Post: Beats.
Jun 22nd 2008
29
RE: The Offical Feedback Post: Beats.
Jun 25th 2008
52
RE: The Offical Feedback Post: Beats.
Jul 03rd 2008
92
what up?
Jun 22nd 2008
30
RE: what up?
Jun 22nd 2008
31
RE: what up?
Jun 23rd 2008
34
RE: what up?
Jun 25th 2008
50
SON. That cut is hot!
Jul 05th 2008
100
      Thanks all who peeped...
Jul 11th 2008
115
Check it, check it out
Jun 23rd 2008
32
RE: Check it, check it out
Jun 25th 2008
53
www.myspace.com/knowlegeproductions
Jun 23rd 2008
33
RE: www.myspace.com/knowlegeproductions
Jun 25th 2008
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      RE: www.myspace.com/knowlegeproductions
Jun 30th 2008
77
beats for critique...jayech
Jun 23rd 2008
35
RE: beats for critique...jayech
Jun 25th 2008
54
More beats
Jun 23rd 2008
37
more
Jun 24th 2008
38
RE: more
Jun 25th 2008
57
I love this Track. Can I use this?
Jul 08th 2008
110
RE: More beats
Jun 25th 2008
56
      No. It was some bossa nova cat's song.
Jul 01st 2008
84
Boston Massacre on sig
Jun 25th 2008
42
RE: Boston Massacre on sig
Jun 25th 2008
55
thanks man
Jun 26th 2008
60
Oh shit, ATL
Jul 05th 2008
101
      thanks
Jul 07th 2008
106
Lloyd ft. Lil Wayne- Girls Around The World remix..
Jun 27th 2008
62
RE: Lloyd ft. Lil Wayne- Girls Around The World remix..
Jun 27th 2008
65
I'm could use some help on a track
Jun 27th 2008
63
Couple of ideas:
Jul 05th 2008
102
Link has changed
Jul 18th 2008
138
4 new joints up on myspace.
Jun 27th 2008
64
Jay-Z-Roc Boys(Orly Remix)
Jun 27th 2008
66
RE: Jay-Z-Blue Magic(Orly Remix)
Jun 27th 2008
67
RE: Jay-Z-Blue Magic(Orly Remix)
Jun 30th 2008
74
RE: Jay-Z-Roc Boys(Orly Remix)
Jun 30th 2008
80
"tHe PiFF pArT 2.... tHe Re-Up!!!!" nEw tRaCk!!!!!
Jun 28th 2008
68
newest one added: 'julie'
Jun 28th 2008
69
RE: The Offical Feedback Post: Beats.
Jun 28th 2008
70
RE: The Offical Feedback Post: Beats.
Jun 29th 2008
71
I LOVE theses, can I use them for a show?
Jul 08th 2008
111
RE: The Offical Feedback Post: Beats.
Jun 30th 2008
81
'aMy's aDDiCTioN"!!!! nEw tRaCK!!!!
Jun 29th 2008
72
D00d, your typing is killing me.
Jul 05th 2008
98
RE: The Offical Feedback Post: Beats.
Jun 30th 2008
73
Tiffy The Gift (soul students)- No Brainer (prod, by Haywood)
Jun 30th 2008
75
RE: The Offical Feedback Post: Beats.
Jun 30th 2008
78
That WGTF cut has some great colors in it and it doth bang.
Jul 05th 2008
99
Lookin for feedback on a couple of flips
Jun 30th 2008
82
RE: Lookin for feedback on a couple of flips
Jul 16th 2008
121
Haroon Al-Qahtani's Free, Uncompressed, Beat Downs (Free Hip-Hop Beats)
Jun 30th 2008
83
RE: Haroon Al-Qahtani's Free, Uncompressed, Beat Downs (Free Hip-Hop Bea...
Jul 02nd 2008
86
RE: Haroon Al-Qahtani's Free, Uncompressed, Beat Downs (Free Hip-Hop Bea...
Jul 02nd 2008
88
any chance of mp3's for beat listeners
Jul 03rd 2008
90
RE: Haroon Al-Qahtani's Free, Uncompressed, Beat Downs (Free Hip-Hop Bea...
Jul 05th 2008
95
NEW JACK SWING IS BACK!!!!
Jul 02nd 2008
85
RE: The Offical Feedback Post: Beats.
Jul 02nd 2008
87
Flo-Rida Remix.
Jul 02nd 2008
89
RE: The Offical Feedback Post: Beats.
Jul 03rd 2008
93
80's synth pop into hip hop as interopreted by me
Jul 05th 2008
94
Squeeze Remix:
Jul 05th 2008
96
new one up called to '2 Hijrah'
Jul 05th 2008
103
4 more...enjoy!
Jul 06th 2008
104
Reggae beat
Jul 06th 2008
105
This doesn't play
Jul 08th 2008
112
RE: The Offical Feedback Post: Beats.
Jul 07th 2008
108
RE: The Offical Feedback Post: Beats.
Jul 10th 2008
113
RE: The Offical Feedback Post: Beats.
Jul 10th 2008
114
Slow Yo Role
Jul 12th 2008
116
RE: The Offical Feedback Post: Beats.
Jul 14th 2008
117
Nas "One Love" - Haroon's Gusty Remix
Jul 14th 2008
118
new beat added to playlist...
Jul 14th 2008
119
RE: NEW producer on the board
Jul 15th 2008
120
RE: NEW producer on the board
Jul 16th 2008
122
Lol, that goes both ways plair
Jul 17th 2008
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      RE: Lol, that goes both ways plair
Jul 18th 2008
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      RE: Lol, that goes both ways plair
Jul 18th 2008
130
RE: NEW producer on the board
Jul 17th 2008
123
      RE: NEW producer on the board
Jul 18th 2008
128
RE: new beat added to playlist...
Jul 17th 2008
127
thnks!!
Jul 19th 2008
141
My god, man
Jul 18th 2008
131
thanks!!
Jul 19th 2008
142
RE: new beat added to playlist...
Jul 19th 2008
143
      thnks for the feedback.
Jul 21st 2008
145
myspace.com/spearminttbeats
Jul 17th 2008
124
John Record - "Smoke Signals (Chuck P Remix)" - LINK
Jul 17th 2008
125
new beats for critique...jayech
Jul 18th 2008
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Any feedback is welcome
Jul 18th 2008
133
RE: Any feedback is welcome
Jul 18th 2008
134
RE: Any feedback is welcome
Jul 19th 2008
144
Here's another one with vocals
Jul 18th 2008
136
New Joint........ "e-PiLLz"!!!!!!!
Jul 19th 2008
139

The3rdOne
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1. "one leak"
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http://www.zshare.net/audio/13708555a1dbeb35/

  

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JAESCOTT777
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2. "That shit is dope"
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Mon Jun-16-08 03:43 PM by JAESCOTT777

  

          

i like it a lot

damn he spitting too
shit is heat

  

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The3rdOne
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3. "RE: That shit is dope"
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Thanx for the listen

  

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The Karolina Kid
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91. "The Karolina Kid"
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I can Dig it.

The Karolina Kid

We Putting Monkeys In Ya Trunk!
http://www.myspace.com/krookincproductions

  

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NoDrawls McGraw
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4. "That jawn was iLL. And Sun was spittin' Darts!!!!!"
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*Daps*

https://chriswind.bandcamp.com/track/massage

"You can take an African out of Africa, but you can't take Africa out of the African"
Afro-Americana/Afro-Caribbana/Afro-Latino unite. We are ALL Black!

  

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Names
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17. "RE: one leak"
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classy, good cut up guitar, solid rap, good ad lib, good work iron chef

  

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willi_dudat
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36. "RE: one leak"
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this is pretty damn awesome...

hi 5...

"It's the return of the gangsta, thanks ta..."

-du

  

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raw_pockets
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39. "RE: one leak"
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jeah-- definitely feeling the whole joint, conception to execution

  

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Brione
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76. "RE: one leak"
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This is kool I'm diggin it..

Peace

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109. "I REALLY like this"
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140. "yeah......you beasted that track, fam."
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good shit!

We see through all that boo boo like it's ghost shit... (c) Quelle Chris

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5. ""believe" and "ballad". will return reviews."
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http://www.myspace.com/coldtruth

thanks in advance, i will be returning reviews.

-Sig-

“Why didn’t you do this in your own god damn country?"

-All Stah's view on undocumented immigrants wanting to be treated like human beings.

  

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11. "RE: "believe" and "ballad". will return reviews."
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Sounds score-ish. What are you using? Very good...Keep it up.

  

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Cold Truth
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19. "cubase, kontakt, hypersonic, FM8, battery"
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thanks

-Sig-

“Why didn’t you do this in your own god damn country?"

-All Stah's view on undocumented immigrants wanting to be treated like human beings.

  

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6. "check out 9 and 10"
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I will post two more by the end of the week. Give me some feedback.

http://soundcloud.com/deemack1

  

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The3rdOne
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12. "RE: check out 9 and 10"
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9 is really dope. nice feel to it.

10 is okay. Loose feel. You fuck around with the stabs long enough u'll get a good groove.

  

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Names
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18. "RE: check out 9 and 10"
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wicked loop on 9, I'd clean up the mix a little bit if you can

  

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7. "jayech new music.. for critique"
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I have added some new ones. Thanks to those who have come through and checked out the music once again. "Left and Right" is new and some other ones.

www.soundclick.com/jayech


peace


jayech

  

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Names
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9. "RE: jayech new music.. for critique"
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I like the experimental quality of the sounds and samples your working off as well as the sense of rhythm and the electro-ish influence. On the flip side the beats may end up being a little to cold and dissonant. A little hint of melody in the bass or the upper range either sampled and played could really open up your sound. That's all I got, don't walk in traffic.

  

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The3rdOne
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13. "RE: jayech new music.. for critique"
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i listened to the first four on your page. Sounds like you are finding your sound. I see good potential. I think you keep your joints simple on purpose tho. Keep it up.

  

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8. "RE: The Offical Feedback Post: Beats."
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here is a remix i did of common's "I used to love H.e.r." it for a contest that is running over at Kevin Nottingham's blog

check it out

http://www.zshare.net/audio/13677059016fbfc3/

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<----DAMN!
Straddling the Line Between Genius and Insanity

https://soundcloud.com/headnoddaproductions

  

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The3rdOne
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14. "RE: The Offical Feedback Post: Beats."
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The track is nice. Good flip. Somewhere in the song the vocals got off timing but it was cool otherwise.

  

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Names
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10. "newer"
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weekdays on the myspace is something new, listen if you like, comments would make me feel all warm and fuzzy unless they are on the tough love tip in which case that's cool too. Have a good one

  

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15. "RE: newer"
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fire escape - good shit. all about the chops.
REM - okay..Are you playing live or is that chopped?
record - really dope...time sig? 7/8? dont knwo what the fuck that is but i like it.
ooze - i like it.
weekdays - good guitar chop
wakey wakey - nice. would make a hot song with lyrics on it.

  

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Names
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16. "RE: newer"
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Tue Jun-17-08 06:07 PM by Names

  

          

r.e.m everything is live but the drums (oh shit and the guitar is an elliot smith sample, whoops) and records is actually 4/4 if I'm not mistaken, its all in how you divy that shit up. I've got a couple weird time signature beats I might throw up eventually. Thanks for the listens

  

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135. "RE: newer"
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I like fire escape and records.

Ooze has a nice groove to it as well. Very chill.

  

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samukalra
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20. "Lookin for emcees for some of these..."
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Wed Jun-18-08 12:27 AM by samukalra

  

          

Haven't made much new in a while, but whatever, please tell me what you think. check sig..

check:
http://myspace.com/resolveddissonance

  

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43. "RE: Lookin for emcees for some of these..."
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Final Days - an ok beat, good break down
You're Lovely - Really feeling this one. Nice feel to it.
Stay Cool - not a bad track. Emcee is okay.
Do You Love Me - okay joint. you are finding your basslines.
The Beginning - This is okay. I would change some drum variation to it tho.
Green Blue - Nice chill joint. Like before, i would work on different drum variations. Not bad for a years work.

  

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NoDrawls McGraw
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58. "Yo I'm diggin these...."
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I like the jazz aesthetic that underscores your beats....
and the drums on "You're Lovely" are dope as hell.

*DAPS*

https://chriswind.bandcamp.com/track/massage

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21. "I finally updated the page"
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and I should have more new ones next week... feedback appreciated!

www.anthologyfmn.com

Enter the Written World of Fahim Malik Nassar

The House of Caine (available)

Melancholoy Funk (available)

Tha Anthology (Words 2001-2003) Poetry inspired by OKP and Wash, DC
(available)

The Spook who sat by the Radio Poetry (av

  

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Soon
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97. "Damnsun, that Christmas joint is like epic big and dark"
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But I mean, that's the kind of sound I'm all over..good shit.


Hell, all these joints got the sound to em..I've been sleeping!

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https://soundcloud.com/marianmereba/blue-for-mr-green-real-soon

  

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107. "I make those kinda tracks!"
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I love epic, big, dark beats... and yo, big thanks for the look-out!

Dark Knyte (stage name)

www.anthologyfmn.com

Enter the Written World of Fahim Malik Nassar

The House of Caine (available)

Melancholoy Funk (available)

Tha Anthology (Words 2001-2003) Poetry inspired by OKP and Wash, DC
(available)

The Spook who sat by the Radio Poetry (av

  

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jdubs36
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22. "RE: I got some classic bangers"
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do you agree? real talk appreciated.

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The3rdOne
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44. "RE: I got some classic bangers"
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Twist it up - Ha..sounds like a west coast (early) Dumhi. This is pretty ok.
New 2 - This is nice. Good chop. nice feel to it.
Flawsy - this is cool...reminds me of beats my man random used to make.
4 - this is ok. headnodder.
Brand New - it's ok. Flippin that curtis mayfield sample seems like a rite of passage for beatmakers
New 1 - ok. Once you find your pocket, I think you'll be able to improve with your chops and flips.

  

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jawnyquest
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79. "RE: I got some classic bangers"
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>Twist it up - Ha..sounds like a west coast (early) Dumhi.
>This is pretty ok.

Damn-- that's the first thing I thought when I heard this!!!

  

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Abstrakt Soundz
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23. "This may make you question your definition of Hip Hop..."
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http://www.dubcnn.com/mixtapes/element-custommade-greatexpectations/


eh emm... to be or not to be... that is the question haha...

Abstrakt Tha Butcher

http://www.mediafire.com/?qzgg8fffq0sglay
When Hip hop was FRESH

http://www.myspace.com/abstraktsoundz

http://cdbaby.com/cd/elementla
Dope Music

http://twitter.com/AbstraktSoundz
Abstrakt Soundz on twitter

  

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The3rdOne
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45. "RE: This may make you question your definition of Hip Hop..."
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Abs Prayer - Its cool. Would have liked it better if you chopped it more. Thats just me tho. The drums sound so background.
Revolutionary - Not bad. seems a little untuned in parts. Keep on workin on that pocket.
Bitter - Must be a story behind this one. Tried to read your blog on your Black album project.
Breathe - okay this is tight.
Escalades - I like it. nice flip. It goes with the vocals.
Extremely Bored - This is tight also. good work

  

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Abstrakt Soundz
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24. "RE: The Offical Feedback Post: Beats."
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damn... my bad folks.. wrong board...

Abstrakt Tha Butcher

http://www.mediafire.com/?qzgg8fffq0sglay
When Hip hop was FRESH

http://www.myspace.com/abstraktsoundz

http://cdbaby.com/cd/elementla
Dope Music

http://twitter.com/AbstraktSoundz
Abstrakt Soundz on twitter

  

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delc1986
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25. "RE: The Offical Feedback Post: Beats."
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New beat update @ http://www.caryclark.com

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Cary Clark
Engineer and Producer
www.caryclark.com
Contact@caryclark.com

  

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The3rdOne
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46. "RE: The Offical Feedback Post: Beats."
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Hey lover - Sounds good over the rhyme but the singing....eh. Nice track tho.
From My Block - This joint is nice. emcee is actually tight.
With A Quickness - okay. Sounds like some underground 90s stuff.
Chess Moves - This is okay. good match (no pun intended).

  

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137. "RE: The Offical Feedback Post: Beats."
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OK, From My Block is nice. Good stuff.

Same goes for With a Quickness.

I'm liking the vibe of your stuff.

  

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26. ""seven sands, create, and tribal funk""
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when able, check myspace link below for new music:

Thnks.

Jo.

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The3rdOne
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47. "RE: "seven sands, create, and tribal funk""
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Seven Sands - ehh. a little mundane for my taste
tribal funk - okay this is more like it. Really grimy. I like it.
Create - its okay. Sounds like you do a lot of freehand unquantized.
Kava - This is dope. Like the muting effect. Really grimy.
Tribal Callin - Sounds like you got you hands on some tribal sounds and went at it. this is cool. Good for experimenting.
Travelin - I like this here. sounds really broken. Good stuff, keep it up.

  

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61. "thanks for the feedback..."
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Thu Jun-26-08 09:22 AM by jomac

  

          

appreciate you takin time to listen and respond.

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Yadgyu
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27. "Let me teach you how to flip a sample:"
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http://www.soundclick.com/util/getplayer.m3u?id=6649457&q=hi

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48. "get money!!"
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28. "NeW TrAcK!!! "tHe iLL CoNTacT"!!!!!"
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NeW TrAcK!!! "tHe iLL CoNTacT"!!!!!

TaKe oUt tHe SeeDS....

SpLit tHe dUtCh DowN tHe MidDLe....

RoLL iT uP.....

iNhALe.....

"tHe iLL CoNTacT"!!!!!

pEAcE:
FM71
a.K.a.
AgEnT X!!!!

www.myspace.com/flowmontana71

"GOD iS LovE"...

  

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raw_pockets
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40. "RE: NeW TrAcK!!! "tHe iLL CoNTacT"!!!!!"
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nice drums... like that

  

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41. "RE: NeW TrAcK!!! "tHe iLL CoNTacT"!!!!!"
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thank you fam... good looks...







www.myspace.com/flowmontana71

  

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The3rdOne
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49. "RE: NeW TrAcK!!! "tHe iLL CoNTacT"!!!!!"
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Not bad...I liked your other ghostface remixes too.

  

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51. "RE: NeW TrAcK!!! "tHe iLL CoNTacT"!!!!!"
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Thanx my dude....

www.myspace.com/flowmontana71

  

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darksyde
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29. "RE: The Offical Feedback Post: Beats."
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<a href="http://www.soundclick.com/bands/default.cfm?bandid=390070">darksyde</a>

  

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The3rdOne
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52. "RE: The Offical Feedback Post: Beats."
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You have a lot of joints on your page. heard some good stuff. Sounds like u do a lot of sample mashing. Keep doing your thing.

  

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The Karolina Kid
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92. "RE: The Offical Feedback Post: Beats."
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nice.
check some sounds from the south. gimme feedback.

The Karolina Kid

We Putting Monkeys In Ya Trunk!
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willi_dudat
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30. "what up?"
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"it don't stop"

vvv the link below vvv

"It's the return of the gangsta, thanks ta..."

-du

  

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Names
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31. "RE: what up?"
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that shit was a lot of fun. Mixes were a little rough, but I was enjoying each track. Keep creative and spitting nice, you deserve a cookie.

  

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34. "RE: what up?"
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Man you doing your thang!
Your beats are interesting and the flows are on point.
Good stuff brotha.

-Slick Ant-

  

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The3rdOne
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50. "RE: what up?"
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This is dope. I think you are stepping you game up nicely with the beats and rhymes

  

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Soon
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100. "SON. That cut is hot!"
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It's been a minute since I've heard someone catch a light-hearted kind of sound like this here, at least on purpose. And where are those pizzicato strings from?


http://twitter.com/RSoon
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115. "Thanks all who peeped..."
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Newer one... I made this with Jean Grey in mind... hope she hears this and likes it... "Heart and Soul of NYC" by yours tru...

link>>>: www.myspace.com/pepeledu

"It's the return of the gangsta, thanks ta..."

-du

  

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32. "Check it, check it out"
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www.myspace.com/808studio

.........................................................
http://www.myspace.com/rosaliiinda
http://www.the808studio.com

  

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The3rdOne
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53. "RE: Check it, check it out"
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Get Up - not bad. Way to bring out the break drums and polish em.
Shadowboxing - This is ok. the first phrase sounds like some black milk stuff.
Pedal To Metal - different. Dope 80's synth horns. Anthem shit. gets nod.
Real Thang - Dope. Gave track a good feel. Tune kind off in certain spots, but it bangs.
Nice - good flip for the drumtrack. Quality chops.
Smoke - this is good. hard drums make the jazz bang. Would rhyme over this.

  

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33. "www.myspace.com/knowlegeproductions"
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Nothing really new on the page cause I've been working on the album, but I'd appreciate the feedback anyway. And as always, if you listen to mine I will def listen to yours..

www.myspace.com/knowlegeproductions

Peace

  

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59. "RE: www.myspace.com/knowlegeproductions"
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I'm A Boss - Nice flip. Never would have thought of this. good additions
Get It Started - Not your typical Philly music. This jawn is ok.
Back In The Day - Let me guess...."Christmas Time Is Here"? That's dope.
World In Changes - I like this a lot. Not a bad flip.
Me Im Jus Me - Track is nice. Not my style of rap, but they rode this nice. 2nd cat sounds like the heir to sir-mix-lot.
Aint A Dream - This is ok. Would have liked to heard an acapella on this. Keep your grind up.

  

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77. "RE: www.myspace.com/knowlegeproductions"
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Thanks man..

Peace

www.myspace.com/knowlegeproductions

  

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jhall104
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35. "beats for critique...jayech"
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To all that have come and checked out the tracks, I thank you for the support. I have two new ones "Walk on By" and "Joy". I would appreciate some feedback good or bad. Thanks again to the okayplayer forums.


www.soundclick.com/jayech

peace


jayech

  

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The3rdOne
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54. "RE: beats for critique...jayech"
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joy - This is cool. Keep it up.
Walk On By - Doesn't sound bad. a little simplistic, but that's your style.

  

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Yadgyu
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37. "More beats"
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http://www.zshare.net/audio/14110738480bba7a/

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38. "more"
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http://www.zshare.net/audio/141149260bf8b91a/

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The3rdOne
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57. "RE: more"
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get money!!!

  

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110. "I love this Track. Can I use this?"
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The3rdOne
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56. "RE: More beats"
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nice ample flip....what was that? james brown?

  

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Yadgyu
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84. "No. It was some bossa nova cat's song."
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I liked it so I flipped it.

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42. "Boston Massacre on sig"
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since no one listened last time

  

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The3rdOne
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55. "RE: Boston Massacre on sig"
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Boston Massacre - This beat is sick. Good song. I like the last cat's flow. Good look on J Ro!
Blue Magic - This is dope. This actually works.
American Dreamin - This is cool. The vocals are off timing. Beat is tight. Sounds like Kev Brown drum programming.
Flawless Victory - not bad. Really raw. keep doing it.
Back In The Days - This is cool. You flow like Flud from Dumhi. Beat is tight.
A Beautiful Day - This is aight. interlude shit.

  

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60. "thanks man"
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yeah the amercian dreamin 1st verse was kinda off
but as long as you felt the beat

  

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Soon
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101. "Oh shit, ATL"
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Y'all killin the mic on Flawless Victory. The beat is real cool..something about the tail on the snare hits me a little funny but that's my only beef on it.


For some reason, Boston Massacre makes me think of Halloween the movie..lol...but that cut is hitting hoard. Could use some tweaks in the mix, but ain't that true of all of us. Good shit!


http://twitter.com/RSoon
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https://soundcloud.com/marianmereba/blue-for-mr-green-real-soon

  

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106. "thanks"
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62. "Lloyd ft. Lil Wayne- Girls Around The World remix.."
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http://www.zshare.net/audio/142731950324e6e2/

Please listen to my remix family..

Let me know what yall think..any feedback yall can give. Even if you hate the song but love the beat..let me know.

Much appreciated fam

winterallyear.bandcamp.com

LISTEN:
Soundcloud- https://soundcloud.com/winterallyear-music

Facebook- https://www.facebook.com/pages/WinterAllYear/616989854981972

  

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65. "RE: Lloyd ft. Lil Wayne- Girls Around The World remix.."
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yo man...
im really feeling this remix.....
much respect

Myspace: www.myspace.com/orlyrodriguez

  

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BlueNote
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63. "I'm could use some help on a track"
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I just started this instrumental today and I'm stuck. It just doesn't sit right with me and I would like to get other people's opinions while I'm still in early stages. I'm more into making electronic stuff more than just hip-hop, (my myspace profile is http://www.myspace.com/timwroteasong if you're curious)

anyways you can listen to the track at

http://timothypaulmoore.com/blog/?p=81

Thanks.

http://www.timothypaulmoore.com
http://www.lettertojane.com

  

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Soon
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102. "Couple of ideas:"
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Cut out at least one if not two instruments EVERYWHERE. Not the same ones, of course, but like, let the electric piano and guitar chill while the acoustic piano and the synths duke it out, or let the synths relax while you riff on the e. piano.

You've got every instrument going at full steam the whole time, and everyone's playing improv-style licks. Overkill! Scale it back. I'd say let those dual synths breathe the most; they kind of run into each other as it is (try adjusting the timbre on one to give them more individuality, and the way you have it panned should take care of the rest). Really, those kinds of synths seem to work best if they kick in, do some damage, and drop out, and just coming back every once in a while for effect.


Like, there's great ideas and the overall groove is hip, but it's all getting buried in the sheer mass of the parts playing simultaneously.


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138. "Link has changed"
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http://www.timothypaulmoore.com/music

http://www.timothypaulmoore.com
http://www.lettertojane.com

  

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64. "4 new joints up on myspace."
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including a dwele-remix. would love to get some feedback.

n.

www.myspace.com/ninjobeats

  

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66. "Jay-Z-Roc Boys(Orly Remix)"
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http://www.zshare.net/audio/143227617c9d309c/

this remix is unmixed....i wanted some feedback from my okp fam before i finish it...

Myspace: www.myspace.com/orlyrodriguez

  

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67. "RE: Jay-Z-Blue Magic(Orly Remix)"
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my bad.....thats roc boys...hahahha

sorry yall

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74. "RE: Jay-Z-Blue Magic(Orly Remix)"
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i digs them drums dunsun! nice sample.. good shit!

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80. "RE: Jay-Z-Roc Boys(Orly Remix)"
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>http://www.zshare.net/audio/143227617c9d309c/
>
>this remix is unmixed....i wanted some feedback from my okp
>fam before i finish it...
>
>

real real smooth fam

  

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68. ""tHe PiFF pArT 2.... tHe Re-Up!!!!" nEw tRaCk!!!!!"
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RuNNiN LoW....

NuThIn 2 roLL uP....

"tHe PiFF pArT 2.... tHe Re-Up!!!!"

www.myspace.com/flowmontana71

ScRoLL dOWn anD CLicK iNSiDe tHe IPOD....

EnJoY!!!!

PeAcE...
FM71
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AgEnT X!!!!!

  

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69. "newest one added: 'julie'"
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when able check the link below for playlist:

Thnks. Jo.

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70. "RE: The Offical Feedback Post: Beats."
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a couple of joints:

http://www.zshare.net/audio/14378641dd946fc3/ (dream)

http://www.zshare.net/audio/1437866919af5b4a/ (untitled piano)

http://www.zshare.net/audio/143787170b9feadc/ (sunset in a concrete jungle)

http://www.zshare.net/audio/1437918979794cc6/ (bizssaf)

any feedback appreciated

  

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71. "RE: The Offical Feedback Post: Beats."
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oh, and

http://www.zshare.net/audio/14400682f8f51fa6/ bombom (c) rza

  

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111. "I LOVE theses, can I use them for a show?"
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81. "RE: The Offical Feedback Post: Beats."
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sunset is a sick beat..has anyone spit over this one yet sir?

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72. "'aMy's aDDiCTioN"!!!! nEw tRaCK!!!!"
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oH AmY....

wHaT r We GoNna do
wITh yOu....

"aMy's aDDiCTioN"!!!

www.myspace.com/flowmontana71

pEaC

FM71
a.K.a.
AgEnT X!!!!!

  

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Soon
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98. "D00d, your typing is killing me."
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The only thing I wish about the Amy joint is that the mixing were tweaked some. Like, the drums want to cut through, but there's so much open air in the music samples that it's killing the headroom. If you can make more room for the drums to snap properly, IMO this cut will bang even harder than it already is...it def. is banging btw.


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73. "RE: The Offical Feedback Post: Beats."
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Oh This Is The Beats Post..lol...Check Me Out... www.myspace.com/909lab

  

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75. "Tiffy The Gift (soul students)- No Brainer (prod, by Haywood)"
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http://www.zshare.net/audio/14280395ada01f38/


winterallyear.bandcamp.com

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78. "RE: The Offical Feedback Post: Beats."
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Check my page...

http://www.myspace.com/faultfinder1

  

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99. "That WGTF cut has some great colors in it and it doth bang."
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http://twitter.com/RSoon
http://soonsounds.com <--- Peace for the Fiery Heart
https://soundcloud.com/marianmereba/blue-for-mr-green-real-soon

  

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82. "Lookin for feedback on a couple of flips"
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Not my soundclick, but my dude never gets on the boards. He's killin it on a few new ones though imo. feedback appreciated

peep:
"celestial blues"
"please, please, please"
"summertime"
"after the laughter" (i think RZA flipped this)

link: http://www.soundclick.com/djgilson

again, feedback is appreciated. thanks

  

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121. "RE: Lookin for feedback on a couple of flips"
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anybody???????

  

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83. "Haroon Al-Qahtani's Free, Uncompressed, Beat Downs (Free Hip-Hop Beats)"
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It's been almost a week since I got my MPC, and here's a few little beats I've done so far. Like any of them? Go ahead and use them for whatever project you want, just be sure to let me know about it, hear it, and be kind enough to actually give me credit.

A .ZIP file containing six WAV files can be downloaded at the following link:

http://homepage.mac.com/alqahtani/.Public/freebeatdown.zip

If you decide to use them, or just want to holler at me you can reach me at the following address:

al underscore qahtani at yahoo dot com.

Enjoy!

Beats, mixes, mashups, writing and more:

http://homepage.mac.com/alqahtani/

  

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86. "RE: Haroon Al-Qahtani's Free, Uncompressed, Beat Downs (Free Hip-Hop Bea..."
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Hey, dope music man...I enjoyed the homepage too. Talented man here..

  

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88. "RE: Haroon Al-Qahtani's Free, Uncompressed, Beat Downs (Free Hip-Hop Bea..."
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really good group joints man

  

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90. "any chance of mp3's for beat listeners"
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aka ppl who just liek to listen to beats

________________________________________________________________
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95. "RE: Haroon Al-Qahtani's Free, Uncompressed, Beat Downs (Free Hip-Hop Bea..."
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Thanks guys.

Beats, mixes, mashups, writing and more:

http://homepage.mac.com/alqahtani/

  

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85. "NEW JACK SWING IS BACK!!!!"
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check out the sig...

https://soundcloud.com/jslikkmusic

  

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87. "RE: The Offical Feedback Post: Beats."
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How does this grab ya?

http://www.imeem.com/amazetbm/music/l86fRYJF/amaze_the_beat_mystic_rockin_it/

He who laughs last...probably didn't get the joke.

Ambient D`n B
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89. "Flo-Rida Remix."
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http://www.zshare.net/audio/1460765419ac10cd/

_

shakin your block with a 6 million dollar bop

_

www.davidevanmcdowell.com

  

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93. "RE: The Offical Feedback Post: Beats."
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4 new beats up! Not your typical Southern Hip Hop.

Let me know what yall think, and shoot me some ideas.




The Karolina Kid

We Putting Monkeys In Ya Trunk!
http://www.myspace.com/krookincproductions

  

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Cold Truth
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94. "80's synth pop into hip hop as interopreted by me"
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"maybe it's not so bad"
http://www.myspace.com/coldtruth

-Sig-

“Why didn’t you do this in your own god damn country?"

-All Stah's view on undocumented immigrants wanting to be treated like human beings.

  

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96. "Squeeze Remix:"
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http://www.myspace.com/realsoonmusic


The original is a Dumhi cut off Yoga At Home Vol. 1 ... and it's posted ad http://www.myspace.com/dumhi .



Good lookeries in advance


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103. "new one up called to '2 Hijrah'"
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when able, give it a listen.

Check myspace below link for playlist.

Jo.

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104. "4 more...enjoy!"
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the myspace link in the sig.

www.anthologyfmn.com

Enter the Written World of Fahim Malik Nassar

The House of Caine (available)

Melancholoy Funk (available)

Tha Anthology (Words 2001-2003) Poetry inspired by OKP and Wash, DC
(available)

The Spook who sat by the Radio Poetry (av

  

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105. "Reggae beat"
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http://www.zshare.net/audio/14786090160f6f75/

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GET ON MY LEVEL!

  

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108. "RE: The Offical Feedback Post: Beats."
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Where would I post this???

wHAT uP y'ALL, mY nAME iS mIC hOLDEN.
i'M aN eMCEE fROM iNGLEWOOD, cALI.

i sTARTED rEADING tHE pOSTINGS iN tHIS fORUM aND yOU aLL
sEEMED tO bE a pRETTY cOOL gROUP oF fOLKS!

i'D lIKE tO gET sOME fEEDBACK oN sOME oF mY jOINTS tHAT i'VE
pOSTED oN mY mYSPACE pAGE. i'M bRAND nEW tO tHE mYSPACE wORLD
sO kEEP iN mIND tHAT i'M sTILL bUILDING mY sITE. aLSO, i'M
sOON tO rELEASE mY dEBUT sOLO aLBUM eNTITLED wAKE uP!!!, a
cOLLABORATIVE eFFORT wITH pRODUCERS mEGAlOSdON & iSH OF
vOTRON eNTERTAINMENT.

cHECK mE oUT aT WWW.MYSPACE.COM/MICHOLDEN4PRESIDENT

aDD mE iF yOU tHINK iT'S hOT!!!

oH, aND bTW, tHESE aREN'T fINAL mIXES...sTILL wORKS iN
pROGRESS...
sO tHE fEEDBACK iS tHAT mUCH mORE iMPORTANT!

hOLLA,


iRON mIC

iRON mIC

  

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113. "RE: The Offical Feedback Post: Beats."
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The songs are sick man. Nice to see you put some live stuff up
there too. Liking the added synth on those pieces.

  

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114. "RE: The Offical Feedback Post: Beats."
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I've been at this beat-making thing for about 6 years now while doing school and I got a track called "The Gift" on my myspace that's kinda jazzy, kinda mellow that I'd appreciate some feedback on.



-------------------------------------------------->
www.myspace.com/thatclassyish

My brain can't stand the silence so I gotta make beats that aim to be timeless.

  

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116. "Slow Yo Role"
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in the sig

<----holler at a player when you see him in the streets (c)Stuart Scott

www.brucegeetz1.bandcamp.com
http://brucegeetz.blogspot.com/

  

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117. "RE: The Offical Feedback Post: Beats."
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check my podcast i posted a new episode yesterday got a 4 new beats at the start http://blackdisciple.podOmatic.com new beat up on my myspace too http://www.myspace.com/blackdisciple2

BE REAL, THE UNIqUE IS APPRECIATED

http://blackdisciple2.bandcamp.com/
http://blackdisciple2.wix.com/darrell-barber-creative (WebSite)
http://blackdisciple.podOmatic.com
http://www.soundcloud.com/blackdisciple2
http://bit.ly/GXwbrG (gallery slidesh

  

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118. "Nas "One Love" - Haroon's Gusty Remix"
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http://homepage.mac.com/alqahtani/.Public/one-love-gusty-mix.mp3

Beats, mixes, mashups, writing and more:

http://homepage.mac.com/alqahtani/

  

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119. "new beat added to playlist..."
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Called it 'Logan' after Wolverine for some reason. Ha!

When able check myspace link below.

Thnks.

Jo

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120. "RE: NEW producer on the board"
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What's up brothers and sisters!?! I go by Sirreal, as in, respect the real. I've been to the site plently of times, but finally decided to join tonight. I really dig and respect the music made by all the okayplayer artists and I would hope they might like me shit if they heard it hahahaha.

Anyway, I am BRAND NEW to the boards so I thought I would introduce myself here since I make musick. I rep Indiana and the Midwes't. I have 13 instrumentals on my myspace, check 'em out and if u got time...let me kno what u think. Keep in mind that they are ALL works in progress and I'm NOT the greatest producer since Dilla, rest his soul.

PIECE,

Keep it Sirreal

I do not use drugs, I am drugs

http://myspace.com/immrsirreal

  

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122. "RE: NEW producer on the board"
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Wed Jul-16-08 11:29 PM by Mr. Sirreal

  

          

^^^Damn, I think I killed the thread. Thanks for makin' me feel welcome. The funny thing is, nobody is gonna read this message until they want they shit reviewed in a couple of days/weeks from now. HAHAHHA. I'm out...

PIECE,

Sirreal

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Soon
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126. "Lol, that goes both ways plair"
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Cats running on here with three posts yelling "check my beats! " is exactly what slows veteran heads down from even logging in.

You want people to listen? Put in a little work. Welcome to OKP!

http://twitter.com/RSoon
http://soonsounds.com <--- Peace for the Fiery Heart
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Mr. Sirreal
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129. "RE: Lol, that goes both ways plair"
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>Cats running on here with three posts yelling "check my
>beats! " is exactly what slows veteran heads down from
>even logging in.
>
>You want people to listen? Put in a little work. Welcome to
>OKP!


No doubt. It DOES go both ways playa. Just give me a fair chance.

Keep it Sirreal

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Mr. Sirreal
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130. "RE: Lol, that goes both ways plair"
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>Cats running on here with three posts yelling "check my
>beats! " is exactly what slows veteran heads down from
>even logging in.
>
>You want people to listen? Put in a little work. Welcome to
>OKP!


Yo Real Soon,

Everyone starts with 1 post. Consider this an early post from my future career as a OKP internet message board veteran. Maybe one day I won't login because someone who just joined wants feedback on their tracks. Who knows...in the end, its all about the music:

--"Audio Warlord"-- I dig the music in this intro for your soundtape. I even get how the juxtaposed vocal scatting is used as an audio metaphor for machine guns. I think a couple phrases in your monologue need to be removed ASAP 2 better suit the conceptual qualities of the soundtape and this intro. I had a long explanation for why, but I erased it, mainly because text can come off as unkind and cold. I just want u 2 please remove specific phrases, which I will list (along with when they show up in the song) and listen 2 tha track again with pauses in place of where the phrases use to be and tell me it dosen't honestly sound better: "I've got nothing 2 say right hear (1:09)" and "I..don't know (1:24)."

--"Roame"-- This is my favorite track. I like the use of the sample. Ur rhymes aren't bad at all. Nice storytelling track. I think u should turn up the hook +3db, "when in Rome do as the Romans do." Also pan the 1st half of the hook all the way 2 tha left and the second half all the way 2 tha right. Leave the echo.

--"Dumhi Toast Remix"-- A fun track about bein' the toast of the town and alcohol metaphors. I think this track is alright. I like the addition of the singer on the track.

--"Sounded Wracked"-- Instrumental track wit' Eastern Flutes/Ouds and drum patterns but played by Western percussion sounds. I am not sure if u did that intentionally. Pretty good mix. One thing that I would have tried is to solo certain elements and then build the track back up all the way only 2 end it abbruptly.

--Random Grow Up Remix-- I like how u brought those very first synth sounds between when dude is 1st speaking and before the 1st hook back into the last verse. I also like the outro because intelligence never went out of style.

--Squeeze Real Soon Remix-- This beat is effective, but I would have liked 2 hear the beat take a unexpected direction during the bridge. Sometime near the end of the 2nd verse. It sounds like a big loop after awhile.

Overall, I think that u got talent and solid tracks. Keep makin' music

PIECE,

Sirreal

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http://myspace.com/immrsirreal

  

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RightMined
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Thu Jul-17-08 03:52 AM

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123. "RE: NEW producer on the board"
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You've got some interesting ideas and some out-there melodies (not a bad thing), but I think your overall sound may be too cluttered. I'd focus on a couple melodies (maybe even a hook). It's easy to stack on rather than build on. You should build.

P.S. - Follow the link to my music, if you're so inclined.

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I bake 'em as fresh as I can make 'em.

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Mr. Sirreal
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Fri Jul-18-08 03:57 AM

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128. "RE: NEW producer on the board"
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Yo RightMined,

1st, Good 2c another producer from IN on the board. I truly appreciate the feedback.

2nd, My spelling and grammar are worth shit, so bare with the many reading pains ahead. I'm tired, so I give a fuck less.

3rd, U were general when u said my overall sound maybe too cluttered. I am not exactly sure what context u were applying, "cluttered" to. Did u mean that all of the sounds were overpowering each other? Or did u mean that the beat was overly complete 2 tha point that u could not forsee an MC being able 2 flow on top? Maybe u meant both? Anyway, I can agree with either and even both with certain tracks. I was actually anticipating that criticism. A track like "ohohriver" is a track that I think is cluttered period. The average rapper could not flow on a track like that. In the past, my style has also been misunderstood by people not just because I strive to be original and not follow trends, but because some of the tracks are meant to stay instrumentals. Meaning, no MC.

4th, Here is my honest opinion of your tracks. I kept in mind that in ur blog u said that the tracks were in their rough demo stage. In some cases I made some suggestions. Please take whatever I say at face value, its not like I think of myself as some high production authority and neither should u:

--The Goods-- The first time I heard this track I didn't like it. That melodic bassline u used (which sounded familiar btw) became annoying because I was anticipating it to change up the entire time and it never did. But the more I heard the track, the more it began to grow on me. I think that the intro is 2 long though. Its interesting how the drum change is suddle with that layered snare that showed up later in the track. I think u should keep that quality in the final beat. You only notice if ur really paying attention, it might not be apparent to the average listener. I am not sure if that was ur intention. I think that the beat could have used a bridge where the track would take a unexpected turn. Maybe add an additional instrument like an electric guitar, choir, horns, vocal sample etc. It became too formulaic and predicable by the end. I think that this track is good ground work for a cathcy track.

--Baybee-- Probably my favorite track. "Ohh baby," I dig that vocal sample. The track does sound like a big loop after awhile though. Find something in additional to the lined up snares 2 brake up the monotany. Perhaps find another part of the sample 2 chop. Or add some synths/piano. I know I hear an additonal melody in my head.

--Move-- For some reason I can hear Jean Grae over this track. I dig this one. I like that light, "lalalah lalalh lahd?" in the background, almost inaudible. It belongs there. See if u can drop the vocal sample and bring it back later. It sounds overused. Nice soulful track.

--Action Man-- I like the balance between the guitars and the strings. I really dig tha bridge when it comes in near the end.

--Tell Me Now-- This is a cool loop. But maybe figure out other ways to break up the monotony of the loop besides the vocal sample. Maybe change the drum pattern AGAIN. Don't think I ain't notice.

--ReUp--This track had some video game kind of sounds in it, which I'm hearing a lot more of now. I like how u use them for the bridge. The intro is 2 long and boring cut at least 10 seconds of it. Please consider switching up the percussion at the end since u have a drum solo goin on. Maybe bring back the hi hats with a different pattern or add some toms and crashes to bring the track to a better climax. If u don't want to do that I'd like to hear use of those video game synths stucatto style.

Overall I think that u have some solid tracks that I would like to hear the final versions of. Take care homie and keep makin' music.

PIECE,

Sirreal

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raw_pockets
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Thu Jul-17-08 08:13 PM

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127. "RE: new beat added to playlist..."
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really feelin the drums on this one... they really hold the whole thing together-- it's pretty abstract. I like the way it jumps around between the different samples, tho the one that gets repeated the most (chorus vocal or somethin?) gets a lil... repetitive. tite tho

  

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141. "thnks!!"
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sher-mighty
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131. "My god, man"
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that Logan is too hard! Nice drum & percussion work,
and the haunting samples set the atmosphere of the tune
nicely. A definate banger.

What kind of emcee would you picture on this, or did you
just build the beat to ride as a lone piece with no accompaniment?

Other than Logan i'm hearing the rest come through, dude you definate
have your own aesthetic and it sounds lovely... Kava is ill too!

Keep this up man....

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babble on in superlatives, we'll just play the music.
Then they'll understand"

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142. "thanks!!"
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ha..

i thought about who would be tight over that beat but couldn't think of one in particular at the moment. Too many nice emcees out there.

appreciate the Kava feedback as well.

Jo.

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143. "RE: new beat added to playlist..."
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That Logan beat is nice. I understand what that other person was saying about the one sample getting a little repetitive, but the drums are tight. That's really what keeps it going, in my mind. The drum sounds fit nicely into the mix and I like the way you flip the beat in a way to create a larger structure.

And then I happen to let the MySpace player keep going and that Kava beat is groovy as hell. The vocal samples in this one are embedded in the groove such that as soon as I here it, I'm anxious to hear it again.

You obviously have a good feel for what you want to do. It seems every beat I make sounds completely different and there's no thread connecting them all as being my own.

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I know I posted these links below, but here they are again.

http://www.zshare.net/audio/155549064a7a0bfc/

http://www.zshare.net/audio/15553267b58cd336/

  

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145. "thnks for the feedback."
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sher-mighty
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124. "myspace.com/spearminttbeats"
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Thu Jul-17-08 07:39 AM by sher-mighty

  

          

www.myspace.com/spearminttbeats


Positive / negative / constructive all welcome.

Thanks.

*edit*

I'm somewhat new to this so this is the most mininmal ish in the sense of what i'm using to make it all- i have no real hardware at the moment, apart from my laptop and software but i will be looking into it, it terms of what i need. As well as that i'm looking to develop my ear in regards to picking samples / drums / and mixing better. As i done said on the space, i'm just trying a ting. Let me know what you guys think.

Thanks again.

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"When we realize that it makes very little sense to
babble on in superlatives, we'll just play the music.
Then they'll understand"

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ChuckFoPrez
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125. "John Record - "Smoke Signals (Chuck P Remix)" - LINK"
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http://www.zshare.net/audio/15464019fe2e4074/

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jhall104
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132. "new beats for critique...jayech"
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Thanks once again to the forum and the people who came through on the site and spun the music. I appreciate the love. I have two new joints up "Love" & "Kicks and Shoes". Once again comments or critiques I would love to hear. Feedback is important to me as well. I should also have some more new stuff coming with some emcees.

Peace,

jayech


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signpost
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133. "Any feedback is welcome"
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I just sent this track to a buddy that might put down some vocals, but it's just the instrumental so far. Did most of this last night, but rounded it out just now.

all yall aint nothin but junk.mp3 - 2.16MB

Check it out!

  

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signpost
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134. "RE: Any feedback is welcome"
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Oh yeah, this track was made completely with samples from only one song. I was proud of that, so I thought I'd let you all know.

  

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144. "RE: Any feedback is welcome"
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Could've sworn there was a link here before.

http://www.zshare.net/audio/15553267b58cd336/

  

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136. "Here's another one with vocals"
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It's just a short idea that, I'm gonna work on expanding along with my man, Russ-L. But here's what we've got so far on this one. He did the vocals and the synth. I did the drums, cello and clarinet samples.

http://www.zshare.net/audio/155549064a7a0bfc/

  

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nappybrooklyn
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139. "New Joint........ "e-PiLLz"!!!!!!!"
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Check It Out.....

www.myspace.com/flowmontana71

PeAcE.....

FM71
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