he is right handed, but it is the left hand that aches from lonliness.
just havin' some fun... -k ~~~~ support the okayPOETS on the freestyle boards... it's not all about battling... ww?d "without awareness, there is no life... only activity"
I shall quote all b/c although there's only 3 lines, the depth of this was "there," you feeling me?
he is right handed,
but it is the left hand that aches from lonliness.
~the wording was lovely here.. Stay Positive and Keep Posting.
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4. "RE: haiku for a fat boy" In response to Reply # 0
altho i imagine there could be lots of interpretations to this... i'm gonna make a stab and tell you what i got from it.. right = what you see left = what you don't see and right = what does left = what he doesn't and i could probably go on and maybe never get at your exactly what you're saying... the point is, this got me thinkin.. in good ways... the depth of three structured lines.. oh how i love haiku...
...wow... the interpretation's deeper than i thought the poem was... ...i just meant he's fat and he masturbates with his left hand since he can't get any... ...but get from it what you will, i guess...
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well, damn that's funny! see i never would of thought of that... maybe cuz i'm a girl... or maybe cuz i take things way too seriously.. that's real funny shit..
12. "Maybe I'm not seeing the humor" In response to Reply # 6
in the fact that someone who is overweight cannot get a companion/loved one to share the most intimate session with. I think that's sad, and I thought the piece was deep simply for that reason. Those are my thoughts.
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I've had enough of danger and people on the streets. I 'm looking our for angels just trying to find some peace. Now, I think it's time you let me know. So, if you love me, say you love me, but if you don't, just let me go. -George Michael
How can I breakthrough? The closer I get the further away from you. Why are you pulling away from me? I only want to comfort you and heal all of your pain--take it all away. You must not know what you mean to me. So caught up inside til you set me free. I want the whole world to dance with me. You've altered my light, now I'm brighter than before. I feel so much more. -The Jazzyfatnastees
I'm so afraid to love you, more afraid to lose; clinging to a past that doesn't let me choose. -Sarah McLachlan
8. "RE: *smirks a smile of pleasure*" In response to Reply # 5
I liked that man made me chuckle. I just got into haiku myself, fun stuff.
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"she lived form nigga to colored to negro to black to afro then african-american and right back to nigga, you figure she'd be bitter in her twilight but she aight cause she seen the circle of life" - talib kweli
I don't think people really think about how fat people feel in this day and age of thin is in, mentality. Not overweight my self, but got some chubby friends. Love for giving them a shout out.
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