1. "is this somewhat of an ode to a guy you kinda like, but" In response to In response to 0
is just a little too short for your or the character's taste? or am i waaaaaayyyyyyy off? LOL. i liked the fact that you ended it with "Can you be tall," sort of posing a question that has no answer, yet... in a way, wanted it answered anyway so you or the character could feel good about herself.