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Topic subjectBut even things for kids should make sense.
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2497193, But even things for kids should make sense.
Posted by Buck, Tue Nov-24-15 11:27 AM
Aiming at 10-year-olds doesn't absolve you from actually telling a story.

If you want to have little guy Neville scratch out a win against giant Mark Henry, fine, but even a child should be presented with some reason, some cause/effect why they're in the ring together in the first place.

Just having random shit happen at random time might work for, say, a 4-year-old, but even Sesame Street develops narratives.