93682, wings of the tongue Posted by iammindful, Sun Jun-14-15 02:50 PM
is a solid phrase of words-work, seriously.
my favorite part:
will you heal the world and be a teacher a great sharer and speaker or will you grab the globe and beat her cheat her and still claim love like the preacher
I speak above I think in the dark Just as the beginning Subconscious breeds the start What is not known Is what is needed most
above, I'd call the meat of your poem, the grit. It's where I thought I connected, understood, pulled more from. It's rhythmic without being sing-songy.
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