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Topic subjectButterflies
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93058, Butterflies
Posted by Intrepid Vixen, Mon Jan-27-14 09:15 PM
Their coming and their passing went
as silent as a tear
rode cheeks like rosy breezes
threading through the air
and flying there
upon the shoulders of the sky
different always to an unassuming eye
and I saw
though they never noticed me at all
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When One learns
to live without fear,
then One cannot be broken.
93061, RE: Butterflies
Posted by ASIEM, Wed Jan-29-14 04:16 AM
"different always to an unassuming eye"

truly modesty deserves to see things as they are meant to be tho quiet

93062, RE: Butterflies
Posted by Intrepid Vixen, Wed Jan-29-14 08:27 PM
I firmly agree. Thank you for the review, darling!
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When One learns
to live without fear,
then One cannot be broken.
93070, RE: Butterflies
Posted by lola1980, Fri Jan-31-14 09:54 AM
The beauty of the butterfly. I also favor very much this quiet unassuming delicate yet strong winged creature. Thank you for sharing your words. Here is a piece I wrote for our beautiful butterflies. Peace

A WINGED BEAUTY

Nestled in her small cocoon
She squirms and turns to find the room
A delicate dance from side to side
As nature makes her wings to fly

The outer layer of her home
Opens to a world unknown
A radiant beauty for all to see
Adorned in purple, black and green

She floats and flutters to say hello
To soaring sunflowers as they glow
Landing low in a graceful stance
Princess Butterfly begins to prance

Desta
93110, RE: Butterflies
Posted by Intrepid Vixen, Mon Mar-03-14 09:09 PM
Beautiful! Butterflies are my favorites insects. They are simply breathtaking to behold. I enjoyed your piece.
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When One learns
to live without fear,
then One cannot be broken.
93071, serenity and calm
Posted by ThaAnthology, Fri Jan-31-14 11:16 AM
feelings evoked from this piece. Like a cold glass of water. Thank you for this.
93111, RE: serenity and calm
Posted by Intrepid Vixen, Mon Mar-03-14 09:10 PM
You're very welcome. And thank you for reading it.
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When One learns
to live without fear,
then One cannot be broken.