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Topic subject | Butterflies |
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93058, Butterflies Posted by Intrepid Vixen, Mon Jan-27-14 09:15 PM
Their coming and their passing went as silent as a tear rode cheeks like rosy breezes threading through the air and flying there upon the shoulders of the sky different always to an unassuming eye and I saw though they never noticed me at all ~~~~~~~~ When One learns to live without fear, then One cannot be broken.
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93061, RE: Butterflies Posted by ASIEM, Wed Jan-29-14 04:16 AM
"different always to an unassuming eye"
truly modesty deserves to see things as they are meant to be tho quiet
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93062, RE: Butterflies Posted by Intrepid Vixen, Wed Jan-29-14 08:27 PM
I firmly agree. Thank you for the review, darling! ~~~~~~~~ When One learns to live without fear, then One cannot be broken.
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93070, RE: Butterflies Posted by lola1980, Fri Jan-31-14 09:54 AM
The beauty of the butterfly. I also favor very much this quiet unassuming delicate yet strong winged creature. Thank you for sharing your words. Here is a piece I wrote for our beautiful butterflies. Peace
A WINGED BEAUTY
Nestled in her small cocoon She squirms and turns to find the room A delicate dance from side to side As nature makes her wings to fly
The outer layer of her home Opens to a world unknown A radiant beauty for all to see Adorned in purple, black and green
She floats and flutters to say hello To soaring sunflowers as they glow Landing low in a graceful stance Princess Butterfly begins to prance
Desta
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93110, RE: Butterflies Posted by Intrepid Vixen, Mon Mar-03-14 09:09 PM
Beautiful! Butterflies are my favorites insects. They are simply breathtaking to behold. I enjoyed your piece. ~~~~~~~~ When One learns to live without fear, then One cannot be broken.
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93071, serenity and calm Posted by ThaAnthology, Fri Jan-31-14 11:16 AM
feelings evoked from this piece. Like a cold glass of water. Thank you for this.
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93111, RE: serenity and calm Posted by Intrepid Vixen, Mon Mar-03-14 09:10 PM
You're very welcome. And thank you for reading it. ~~~~~~~~ When One learns to live without fear, then One cannot be broken.
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