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92727, twenty two and up Posted by ak_reborn, Sat Jun-01-13 07:59 PM
I wont lie to you..I thought about this life and how its purpose isn't worth it less you find yourself a wife, found myself alive barely breathing, i tried to cleanse my body but depression is a lesion, repressed feelings made it worse and even further is the demons tryna poison any positive energy I'm feeling, i relate to suicidal minded people who acc did it they aren't crazy or conceded they just knew too much and hid it, see i brew too much and sip it, love this liquor but it steals all the brain cells replaced by this memory i build, this aint meant to be a film, no arc, no applause? but why my people poor stuck living for the cause? its hard to persevere when you stuck inside a hole but already I achieved more than anyone i know, so this henney i condone, whats next? blurry visions, i think death is the only promise of a blessing for the living.
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92728, RE: twenty two and up Posted by PhotoSynthesis, Sun Jun-02-13 08:03 PM
It's been awhile since I've seen "your" ish. It has a matured/polished, raw (experienced) feel to it.
My how you've grown! :D
*Life Imitates Art*
So are you 22 now?
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92768, RE: twenty two and up Posted by HueyNewton, Thu Jun-20-13 03:08 PM
metaphors, wordstyle, & delivery is A-1, real nice flow!
across 110th street -xxx
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