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91990, "Sole to Soul"
Posted by lola1980, Thu Nov-08-12 08:55 AM
“Sole to Soul”

Living in a world of lunatics
I decided to go crazy on a Monday
Sanity abandoned
My outerwear became a luxury
I could no longer bear
Walking the crowded streets
Talking inside my head to a community of folks
Related but unfamiliar
I saw a woman without shoes
I thought to do the same
So I gave her mine
A perfect fit with room to spare
Her soles would find comfort
My soul would find peace

Desta

91994, RE: "Sole to Soul"
Posted by Street Poet, Fri Nov-09-12 12:32 PM
We often drive ourselves insanity during our quest to find a sane place in this crazy world, only to find out that sanity resides in the peacefulness of the soul. I enjoyed your poem.
92005, RE: "Sole to Soul"
Posted by HueyNewton, Sat Nov-10-12 01:34 PM
interesting concept, write in color {}

a decade of struggle
-xxx
92006, RE: "Sole to Soul"
Posted by Babynoon, Sun Nov-11-12 01:41 PM
I hear you on this
The spirit of helping others is
From the heart is minimal these days
Some do it as a cover

Well if they gave as a cover it's kool
because some won't share at all.


Good Peace Soul
92019, RE: "Sole to Soul"
Posted by ASIEM, Thu Nov-15-12 06:53 PM
I reeeeeeeeaaaaaaalllllyyy love this especially if you actually did it simply PRICELESS!!!!!!!!!
what an excellent idea to plant in the minds of these artist here