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Topic subjectFix You
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74885, Fix You
Posted by Street Poet, Sat Jun-07-08 10:51 PM
She tried her best but didn't succeed
The realities of the world have broken her heart
I see she's in a time of need
She said she's so stressed that she can't sleep
Her life is going in reverse

I hate seeing her so hurt

She's beginning to smile less and less
Mental health issues are starting to manifest
I feel helpless
I don't know what to do

As the love of her life
I told her baby don't worry
Because I'm going to try my best... to fix you

74951, Heart Warming ...
Posted by PhotoSynthesis, Mon Jun-09-08 11:02 PM
You've expressed "her" feelings of failure, disappointment, frustration, sleepless~ness, & stress ...

~And~

Your feelings of helpless~ness, pity, frustration & hope -- (Hope that you can fix her) ...


*Felt*


If ^this^ is true to life 4 U -- Just be sure you have the "MASTER" fix~it MAN on hand to help you fix her -- You can't do it by yo'self -- *Word*




75075, RE: Fix You
Posted by poeticorgasms, Thu Jun-12-08 05:33 PM
Lovely piece, very short but it really got to the heart of things
75632, RE: Fix You
Posted by Jahlovall3305, Tue Jul-08-08 10:05 PM
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>She's beginning to smile less and less
>Mental health issues are starting to manifest
>I feel helpless
>I don't know what to do
>
>As the love of her life
>I told her baby don't worry
>Because I'm going to try my best... to fix you

>Even under stress
>she tried to impress
>and all she have
>feel like less
>what a mess....
>Then came you
>doing your best
>to fix what she had left.

I'm feelin this one. thanks!
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As soon as healing takes place, go out and heal somebody else. Maya Angelou
No man is free until all men are free.

Jah*lov*all of YOU>>>>