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74885, Fix You Posted by Street Poet, Sat Jun-07-08 10:51 PM
She tried her best but didn't succeed The realities of the world have broken her heart I see she's in a time of need She said she's so stressed that she can't sleep Her life is going in reverse
I hate seeing her so hurt
She's beginning to smile less and less Mental health issues are starting to manifest I feel helpless I don't know what to do
As the love of her life I told her baby don't worry Because I'm going to try my best... to fix you
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74951, Heart Warming ... Posted by PhotoSynthesis, Mon Jun-09-08 11:02 PM
You've expressed "her" feelings of failure, disappointment, frustration, sleepless~ness, & stress ...
~And~
Your feelings of helpless~ness, pity, frustration & hope -- (Hope that you can fix her) ...
*Felt*
If ^this^ is true to life 4 U -- Just be sure you have the "MASTER" fix~it MAN on hand to help you fix her -- You can't do it by yo'self -- *Word*
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75075, RE: Fix You Posted by poeticorgasms, Thu Jun-12-08 05:33 PM
Lovely piece, very short but it really got to the heart of things
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75632, RE: Fix You Posted by Jahlovall3305, Tue Jul-08-08 10:05 PM
> > >She's beginning to smile less and less >Mental health issues are starting to manifest >I feel helpless >I don't know what to do > >As the love of her life >I told her baby don't worry >Because I'm going to try my best... to fix you
>Even under stress >she tried to impress >and all she have >feel like less >what a mess.... >Then came you >doing your best >to fix what she had left.
I'm feelin this one. thanks! > >
As soon as healing takes place, go out and heal somebody else. Maya Angelou No man is free until all men are free.
Jah*lov*all of YOU>>>>
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