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65493, I Wish U ... P*E*A*C*E ... Posted by PhotoSynthesis, Sun Mar-18-07 09:01 PM
Peaceful … … Tranquil … … Thoughtful … … Thankful … Examine fluid feelings as oceans of emotions Wash lyrically lubricant lotions all over you ~~Gently~~ Bathing your shattered spirit … Remove traces of conspiracy Cleansed of guilt … tilt waves built around fortresses Filled with spilled milk There’s no use crying over it now Questions will always go unanswered Like: Who~What~When~Why & How? Water under the bridge rushes to the ridge of your reality But you’re not really a damsel in distress For you possess street~wise aptitude & keen vitality While glancing over the edge of lyrics ledge ~ cautiously Halt ill feelings ~ nauseously Feel magnetic mists of rain bring healing feeling to your brain Extracting pain ~ Attracting reasons to restrain You must cease storing icons of insanity No longer trusting vanity -- view reflections of calamity As fading illusions caused by multiple contusions to your essence Attempts to diminish your presence Suspend in frozen frames of historic lessons Meditate & contemplate to regain your composure Prior battles in retrospect have caused flashback exposure Peaceful … … Tranquil … … Thoughtful … … Thankful … That’s where you need to be Keepin’ your mental in residential While maintaining a realm of sanity
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65495, RE: I Wish U ... P*E*A*C*E ... Posted by SONO DEF, Sun Mar-18-07 09:04 PM
Hey, what up Photo, you always showin me love, so here i am to say *ahem* this was beautiful...i dont think i've seen any of your posts before, good start for me
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65497, RE: I Wish U ... P*E*A*C*E ... Posted by PhotoSynthesis, Sun Mar-18-07 09:11 PM
Thank U sweetie! -- *much appreciated*
I don't write much anymore -- My steeze is mainly "read & respond" on the board -- But ^this^ flow is more~or~less for Ezzsential -- *That's mah gyrl* -- And I don't wannna see her hurting.
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65498, RE: I Wish U ... P*E*A*C*E ... Posted by Ezzsential, Sun Mar-18-07 09:12 PM
loved this-needed this even though it wasn't for me felt it was and take it in
nuturing needed that
thanks sis
>>>>>>>> shouldn't say it all or it will be taken stolen by the Devil God's my only vacation
...www.soundclick.com/ezzsentialsoul www.myspace.com/ezzsentialsoulmusiq www.myspace.com/ezzsentialsoul www.webspawner.com/users/delicateaurasoul4/index.html
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65508, oh a drop from our Queen... Posted by ASIEM, Sun Mar-18-07 09:55 PM
this eliminates our feeling that any of us are alone ever, there is a spirit realm and this let's us know it. that said Eszzential open your eyes...
"But ^this^ flow is more~or~less for Ezzsential -- *That's mah gyrl* -- And I don't wannna see her hurting." "flow is more~or~less for Ezzsential" thank you photo for the DEW dropped like mannah let us eat lmao i am totaally fuckin wit u you know dat right just pleez>>>
"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..." ASIEM "Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran (Be and it is) " A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder
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65509, RE: oh a drop from our Queen... Posted by PhotoSynthesis, Sun Mar-18-07 10:03 PM
>thank you photo for the DEW dropped like mannah let us eat lmao i am totaally fuckin wit u >you know dat right
Yes I know -- And I LOVE it when you fuck with me! -- *wink~wink* -- :P
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65511, Queen indeed, so Posted by SONO DEF, Sun Mar-18-07 10:15 PM
dont quit now, i want more, i actually think i fell in love with this, the words inspire me, i'm gonna print em out to see every morning when i wake p, to wake me up to push ahead in the morning(we all know school tires us out, and we dont wanna get up)lol
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65528, RE: oh a drop from our Queen... Posted by ASIEM, Mon Mar-19-07 08:00 AM
ok so now my virtual fantasy is on again desire is hired while a goal is a task the journey is better the way to pleasure is found on the road often full of pain that is where fullfilment mingles at the foot of the humble just sniff the aroma rub gently closing the eyes listening as palpatations rhyme with words of simplicity wait for me i am coming too
wink back gggrrrrooowlll u should see my face aaahhrr lol
"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..." ASIEM "Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran (Be and it is) " A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder
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65523, oh i didnt see that... Posted by Ezzsential, Mon Mar-19-07 12:35 AM
thanks asiem
and THANK U PHOTO!!! MUCH NEEDED! ima cry now.. =/
(i been on here all day)
shouldn't say it all or it will be taken stolen by the Devil God's my only vacation
...www.soundclick.com/ezzsentialsoul www.myspace.com/ezzsentialsoulmusiq www.myspace.com/ezzsentialsoul www.webspawner.com/users/delicateaurasoul4/index.html
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65602, RE: oh i didnt see that... Posted by PhotoSynthesis, Tue Mar-20-07 08:06 AM
Don't cry Dry your eyes ::suck it up:: And *smile* -- :D
Rainbows always come AFTER the storm -- And that's a good thing! -- *Yup~Yup*
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65513, This was peace. Posted by KnowOne, Sun Mar-18-07 11:05 PM
n/m
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65521, peace on earth Posted by ms mimi diva, Mon Mar-19-07 12:30 AM
and goodwill poem hunting....thank you
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65548, I'm a fan Posted by Whateva, Mon Mar-19-07 01:51 PM
"Feel magnetic mists of rain bring healing feeling to your brain Extracting pain ~ Attracting reasons to restrain"
this line^^^
the whole verse was ill.
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65564, RE: I Wish U ... P*E*A*C*E ... Posted by C.R.I.S.I.S, Mon Mar-19-07 05:21 PM
This was like the dopest peace i read from someone on hear in a while, I liked you insight and the vivid imagery, it was brilliant.
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65603, Thank U C.R.I.S.I.S.. Posted by PhotoSynthesis, Tue Mar-20-07 08:11 AM
*Much Appreciated* -- ;)
>This was like the dopest peace i read from someone on hear in a while
But you "need" to read more on this board -- *Seriously* -- :9
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65572, RE: I Wish U ... P*E*A*C*E ... Posted by ladysnoblood, Mon Mar-19-07 07:43 PM
dam you go girl what you got a dictionary by you side when you write that was headstrung and it rung stand up for what you believe and who you are and when the tuff times come keep standing for it shell only last a minute but to us it feels like a life time when we continue to think about in our mines unable to let it setting of the sun
great work
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65641, good to see people are still around Posted by MiracleRic, Tue Mar-20-07 11:54 PM
i have a lil peace now
but my muse has either died or is in a coma...
i cant let it rest in peace
so it haunts my notepads...
hmmm....maybe i'll continue this in a new post
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65643, Ahhhhhh -- Prince Charming .... Posted by PhotoSynthesis, Wed Mar-21-07 12:03 AM
:P
*Photo kisses Prince Out Of Coma*
Wake the fuck ^UP^! -- *hehehe*
*Photo kisses Prince's Pen Too*
Now git to writin' scribe ... :9
(((Welcome Back)))
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65654, RE: I Wish U ... P*E*A*C*E ... Posted by savagehenry, Wed Mar-21-07 01:13 AM
Excellent, this is very nicely done.
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65718, RE: I Wish U ... P*E*A*C*E ... Posted by the_best_part, Thu Mar-22-07 06:36 AM
i thought i had already replied to this....
water, clear in the ocean when you can see the fish swimming below. moving like the ocean does, subtle with small white caps on tiny waves. thats what this is.
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65786, *Smiles* Posted by PhotoSynthesis, Fri Mar-23-07 11:12 AM
Your "reply" is like a poem within itself -- :D
Thank you ma'am! -- *Much Appreciated*
I kinda miss YOUR words -- Hope 2 C summmthin' from you soon -- ;)
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65730, and peace to you Posted by Universal Truth Allah, Thu Mar-22-07 11:29 AM
warm currents photo!
the poem is wild. i like it, it has an edge to it that is missing from a lot of so called poems.
i like the tranquil... thoughtful... thankful...
that was just smooth...
Peace!
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65732, RE: I Wish U ... P*E*A*C*E ... Posted by rukudzo, Thu Mar-22-07 12:34 PM
photo i liked this it had a certain feel to it i would love to hear it being read , ver nice
peace
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65844, fave lines Posted by mindful, Fri Mar-23-07 09:35 PM
are here:
As fading illusions caused by multiple contusions to your essence Attempts to diminish your presence Suspend in frozen frames of historic lessons Meditate & contemplate to regain your composure Prior battles in retrospect have caused flashback exposure
*nods* Peace~
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the bitter cannot live with the sweet.
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66100, ^ Posted by blaksilence, Tue Mar-27-07 06:04 PM
>Peaceful … >… Tranquil … > … Thoughtful … > … Thankful … >Examine fluid feelings as oceans of emotions >Wash lyrically lubricant lotions all over you >~~Gently~~ >Bathing your shattered spirit … Remove traces of conspiracy >Cleansed of guilt … tilt waves built around fortresses >Filled with spilled milk >There’s no use crying over it now >Questions will always go unanswered >Like: Who~What~When~Why & How? >Water under the bridge rushes to the ridge of your reality >But you’re not really a damsel in distress
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