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Topic subjectThat's cool. But it is poorly written.
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13036620, That's cool. But it is poorly written.
Posted by Hitokiri, Tue Jun-21-16 10:54 PM
Arya's shit was poorly written. She knows that the waif is after her, yet she's leisurely walking around Bravos tossing bags of money at sailors? Not being careful or cautious as all? After all she's been through? Then she gets stabbed in the stomach and the next episode is on some parkour shit, jumping off ledges and sliding down staircases on her fucking stomach? While being chased around by someone being trained by the worlds foremost group of assassins... who by the way... only trained her in stick fighting. How does that help her become an assassin? Sorry, that's poor writing.

Jon was risen from the dead. Told that "they think you're a god." Yet he not only has trouble getting those same folks who think he's a god to join him, but NO ONE ELSE in the fucking storyline is at all concerned that this dude was dead and now he's not? His death has come up one time since his resurrection. As has the fact that the Lord Commander of the Night's Watch has abandoned them. None of the Norther houses give a fuck about that? Sorry, that's poor writing.

Littlefinger and the knights of the Vale show up at the last minute... the EXACT same thing that happened when Stannis' troops showed up to save the Night's Watch? The EXACT same thing that happened when Tywin's men showed up to save the day at the Battle of The Blackwater? The exact same thing happens in the 3 consecutive big battles? Sorry, poor writing.

Shit even Danaerys' storyline... So she kills the Khals, and that makes the rest of the Dothraki join her? Umm... well when Khal Drogo died, most of his Khalessar left. She was mostly stuck with the women, children, and weak. The stronger warriors decided to become Khal's themselves. Yet this time they all just choose to follow her? Even though we know this isn't how they really function? Even though we know that they have no interest in the seven kingdoms and they are scared of water? They just choose to join her contradicting all that we've learned about them and their culture? Sorry poor writing.