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12846153, Official verdict IMO, they're trying TOO HARD! Posted by bentagain, Mon Jul-06-15 12:40 PM
there's just WAY WAY WAY TOO much going on with the storyline
the homosexual blackwater op turned cop struggling with his identity back home
rinse wash and repeat for the female lead detective struggling with her female identity in a male dominated industry + a public family background immersed in what feels like cult teachings
I could literally type paragraphs for each character presented
in just 3 episodes
the homie should have stuck to the structure of season 1
and developed a couple of these characters
but a handful of characters + a handful of simultaneous plots
it's just WAY TOO MUCH IMO
I would have trimmed it down to the lead investigators and the mayor as the focal points
Rachel, Colin and the Vinci Mayor
all of this other BS; Casper, Vince Vaughn, Gay Cop, the Russians, etc...
only exist in the context of supporting the story which should be in the foreground
government corruption.
for instance, we have an entire team of investigators assigned to this case
= the wire
we saw those characters developed over SEASONS
it's just too much to develop in 10-12 episodes, IMO.
literally, pick a character that's been presented to date
and you could write an entire season on just the issues presented in that character
congrats on creating the all-star lineup of flawed people
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