I just started this instrumental today and I'm stuck. It just doesn't sit right with me and I would like to get other people's opinions while I'm still in early stages. I'm more into making electronic stuff more than just hip-hop, (my myspace profile is http://www.myspace.com/timwroteasong if you're curious)

anyways you can listen to the track at

http://timothypaulmoore.com/blog/?p=81

Thanks.