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3543, i loved the last lines
Posted by mindful, Thu Oct-10-02 06:58 AM
"mythic and vibrant"

the two beginning lines were.. so much more cliche'.. Peace~



im a manic depressive
size of a teardrop
need to be taken
someplace to play
(hope I’m not swallowed)
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