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Topic subjectrd3
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3448, rd3
Posted by jayare214, Tue Sep-02-03 11:16 AM
rhymeless lineless senseless drivel
on the court left colorblind off my crossover dribble
ya mr wipple soft wiffle ball flows get blasted
my lines 'buckled backwards'by ya automatic matress
mackin rappins lackin in fundamental parts
in rap your careers short of skills heart spark and art
you rhyme not - flood the page in attempts to confuse
a plague of locusts im moses amatuer rapper its hopeless
dopeshit will only slide over ya 'beaten gums'
if ya toungue a junkee till he comes and get him sprung
ya done before ya started lyrically mexican foood farted
rapidly gatling that garbage eaten ya lard flows is fattening
im enacting a new program for you minscule minds
with dimunitive lines nonexistent flows n rhymes
translucent mimes mimickin my punches lyriclally stickin
and movin shootin seed in ya hair like conditioning
rippin em like ya pages after reading my work twerp
ya shit makes as much sense as shakespeaeran dirt mcgirt
rappin to pay the bills youd starve sport not enough perks
like ya breasts might i suggest given a pole a twerk
cornball convert convoluted confessions of cowardess
victimize ya date rape metaphor leaving it powerless.

BTW....i aint mention date rape first like chaste-souls said I really do wonder what cats be reading sometimes.....

EZZENTIAL.....
good writing with ya....keep doin ya thing....i might not feel ya style but you did get me heated and wanting to write....big up....
-j